So cute! I love your OCs! How could you just stop there?! No kiss with aralyn and fred yet and callie and george have onlu just got together! What is this?! I would love to find out about the first kiss and the first date

I really like this story a lot! Keep going! I can't wait to hear more! :3

-Nana

AWESOME~ JUST AWESOME~~ Update soon ok~? I'll be waiting~ _

good story :)

cool. it's good but back to fred and aralyn and MAGIC. plz

nice story i really enjoyed it and good vocabulary a lot of the words are from the Hit Parade. LOL no i am not a nerd just studying for the SAT's. Hope you update soon! lots of love Jasmine

humhumhum i found you i found you !:]

haha i created a new account

i haven't been on here in so long ...

that i forgot my password. and it had an old email address

silly me :] stupid kelli :]

and you don't have a bad vocabulary lol its a good story XD

nice nice nice

I like your story. I've looking for twinsXmuggle stories for a time now ! And you're the first I found !

AWW! So wonderfully cute, and funny! I'm lovin' this! Fred and Aralyn better hurry up there.. kiss on the cheek, my god! Get a move, man! lol ;)

Uh. Squee?

This story is absolutely lovely! Both of your OCs are really cute, and George and Calli are freakin' hilarious.

Seriously, I needed something to cheer me up after the Deathly Hallows nightmare (just went through a re-read. Wrong, I tell you, WRONG!), and this was just the ticket. Can't wait to read more!

Keep up the brilliant work,

~ Se-chan

Amazing chapter! Just update sooner please!

That was really cute, but idk... it seemed liek George and Calli got over hating each other pretty quick.

that's better

i don't get why they don't like eachother. doesn't really make sense i think

entertaining :)