| Reviews for When the Line Breaks |
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   MysticalSilverCresent chapter 1 . 4/25/2018 Is Fuji and enemy? |
| MysticalSilverCresent chapter 1 . 4/25/2018 I'm quite curious of this story |
| Cave Inimicum D. H chapter 13 . 3/4/2016 Update pleeeaseThis story is soo good, like actually the plot is one of the best I've ever read. I totally love the idea of Ryoma and Fuji being kinda enemies but at the same time lovers (I hope so, because you didn't get to that point yet). It's just that Ryoma doesn't seem enough... princish. I mean, if he's the Prince and he must be really good, then that action with Niou when Ryoma thought they were on the same level... Nope, Ryoma should've been, you know, better than everyone elseAnd I also prefer more warmish interaction between Echizen brothers (this type when Ryoga is acting luke a fangirl towards Ryomawell, almost) and it also lacked some descriptions of their feelings. I don't think there was even one time when Fuji actually thought how much good looking Ryoma is or cute, ir anything for that matter. And the same goes to Ryoma, how can they fall in love when they don't even actually look at themselves? But still, the story is amazing and I would die from happiness if you magically would come back and finish this. Yeah. Please. |
| RoseAngel16 chapter 13 . 10/24/2013 Please update soon, 'cause this is really good! I Love it! Keep up the fantastic work and update soon pretty please! Xoxo :D |
| Emmy93 chapter 13 . 1/20/2011 are you going to continue this story? |
| ForeverWithoutYou chapter 13 . 1/29/2010 are you ever gonna finish this story? |
| Shuurei chapter 13 . 1/23/2010 Love it Update soon plz? |
| Shuurei chapter 13 . 1/15/2010 Love the plot but could have worked on the ending a bit more |
| Youkai Kisaki chapter 13 . 9/28/2009 Update soon please? You've left me hanging! I want more! Lots more! SO update please ... this is great work! |
| Chrysan chapter 1 . 8/12/2009 I have only just read the first chapter, which looks quite promising. However, I'd like to suggest a higher bounty on the Prince's head. Unless I'm mistaken, 4 grand$40, and that's a really low bounty for someone who assassinated a minister. ; I feel sorry for the minister in fact - his value was so low... Lol. |
| dawn chase chapter 13 . 7/13/2009 update please! |
| afallenheart chapter 13 . 5/1/2009 Hope you update REALLY soon! |
| Krazee.Baybee chapter 13 . 1/4/2009 plz update the storyy! i really wanna know what's gonna happen pwetty pwease... with a cherry on the top it was getting good && i wanna know what happens when fuji helps ryoma get nanako off his back - on chapter 13 when ryoga and fuji were in combat you put in ryoma's name in stead of ryoga's - Fuji twisted -Ryoma’s |
| yumi2482 chapter 13 . 11/10/2008 wow |
| evermorefire chapter 13 . 8/18/2008 This was a great story! Please keep updating! _ |
