This was really really great! I loved your sensual, dark and mysterious Severus, and a really mature, insightful Harry.

Thank you so much for writting this brilliant piece of Snarry

a beautifully written fic with amazing character portrayal. this is the first snarry fic i’ve read that i’ve actually loved, and not felt uncomfortable with. i’ll definitely come back to this stunning piece of writing. thank you.

WHY the HECK would Harry serve detention when he udbt even a student? This story was a bit ridiculous with how Dumbledore blows off such horrible treatment like it's all Harry overreacting when Snape obviously is going to far. I wish I could read this, I live the snarky pairing but this is too off on anything realistic. This is only my opinion and I hope you keep writing and others enjoy your work. Thank you

Oh.
My.
Goodness.
This chapter is so funny I fell off my bed I was laughing so much!

Great story! I love your Severus and Harry! thanks so much for writing!

Omggggggg this

Wow! How did you know Snape would die in book 7?! There were too many deaths in there for sure.

Could probably still be a mute professional seeker!

Magnifique fanfiction vraiment :-*
Félicitations ! continue ainsi et bon courage pour tes fics

dumbles is such a creeper

you make wandless and wordless spellwork sound like they're mostly the same thing, but they're not. it really wouldn't make sense for some nonverbal spells to work with a wand and some not able to

Awwww. Sweet reunion scene. Thanks.

I'm enjoying the story, but had one random thought: How does a mute person use the Floo system? Recording? Ask a House Elf to pronounce the destination? Walking would be easy enough.

They all walk out and leave him with a Slytherin student who hopes he'll die. Yikes!

I love this story so much. I like the way you describe the characters developments and the atmosphere and everything in your story. I enjoy it. thank you for producing such a great and feel good story .