Hurry up with another chapter this sound s fun

write more!

Haha D I liked it! It was so cute! I love how in control Riza was and how Roy was all nervous for once- he's so cocky all the time, someone needs to bring him down! D Besides, they're both too stubborn anyway, for their relationship to work, they've got to break down the wall and let each other in, right? Oh God, I sound like one of those 'how to spice up your life' health book type things! I'll be going now! Buh-Byez!

Xx-Rissy chan-xX

Aww, it was cute! I liked it; for your first fic, not bad! _~ Keep it up!

i think it woulda been funny if riza shot him and then said something like you're paying or w/e...but i did like it

Roy's too slow at times.. LOL It was really cute. Stuttering!Roy was cute.. haha.. Riza does pwn. Good job!

Erinn~

lol short and sweet

Wow... good for a first. I like this a lot! I enjoyed the second half a lot more than the first, but the first half was very good, too! You did a good job with this! Keep on writing!

nice nice job, I was considering doing a fic on ed/winry as well as Roy/Riza, so good job, nice first time.