Perfect. Just perfect. You captured Martha's character perfectly, didn't once bash another character or delve too much into a off-point topic. You stayed true to the story, the character, and the myth that it all circled around.

A wonderful job.

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I think, despite everything, Rose and Martha would probably have gotten along. You did a good job, writing this. And Martha had better feel this way on the show!

Very nice story indeed

wow that was...amazing

Hey there! I really, really liked your story! I've been frustrated all through series three over the Doctor's seemingly incapability to forget Rose. I mean, sure she was fun and brave and all that. But what about Martha? I think she has as much bravery as Rose. And that comment in last week's episode when the Doctor was explaining about how those keys worked so that they would not be seen and he said "It's like when you fancy someone and they don't even know you exist". How mean is that! Sorry, I'm rambling. Anyway, I guess Rose left behind big shoes to fill. I think Martha does it very well, though and I totally agree on what you wrote: Martha will find her own path to take, her own way to set everything right. I'll enjoy seeing her be the hero for once. Oh, I can't wait until tonight! So, keep up the good work and if you feel inspired, write a companion piece to this after having seen the last episode. Maybe something about how Martha acted and her thoughts while doing it? Take care, hugs and kisses!