I love this story, and I enjoy your writing. I've been following this for years, coming back every now and then in hope that there has been an update. You write these two characters so beautifully thatt their personas just seem to come alive from the words on the page. I look forward to more from you in the future. And thank you for this wonderful story.

I was so excited to see an update for this. I really liked the idea of Ghani and Farad'n sharing more than what was stated in the books. I enjoyed this story when I first read to chapter 12 years ago. Now, seeing that they are trusting each other more in your story... yay!

Hello long time no see. I'm happy your updating this story. I love Ghani and Farad'n together. I hope you update soon. I miss reading about them.

Well, that's a good story ! We seriously lack of long stories on the Dune fandom !
I liked Farad'n in the Children of Dune. I will miss him when I'll read the following books. Ghanima too.

Great story, thanks for posting it !

Awww, I like how Farrad'n already knows her so well - and I like the exchange between Ghani and Leto. :)

*Waves* I visited the Dune section of because I was curious and nostalgic-a consuming combination-with the intention of reviewing nothing. In my heart, no one could compare to Mr. Herbert’s epicenes. Then I found your story, and my heart melted. Every sentence was a delight to read. It was nice to see the characters live out a semi- normal life, trying to figure out their place in the new regime. You have built up a comfortable and possibly loving relationship for Ghanima and Farad'n, and it makes me hope that in some parallel book universe, this is the path they get to have. Although Leto’s words, “And its killing me” pierced the little happy place inside my heart somewhat. Oh well. I will just consider Ghanima’s happiness to mean a whole lot to Leto and roll with that. This story idea was absolutely fantastic.

XOXOX

TWBA

I know it's been years since you've last updated this, and I don't even know if you'll get this, but I'm really enjoying the story, and I hope you come back to it someday. :)

oh, this is very good! i always liked Farad'n, it's cool to see more of him. I hope you are planning to continue this...

they're so cute together, and you have a good plot going, I'd love to read more!

Like it and love it all at the same time.

Please continue this fic.

Its very interesting...

I would like to know the ending...

I've always wanted more of a follow up on these two. I've always felt cheated over the fact that so little was ever mentioned of them together. Well done.

I love these two! And I agree - there just isn't enough written about them so thanks for the awesome story! Any chance to continue? ;-D

Interesting, although there are too little of the last three books, here in the Dune section...