I love that "No it's a trap!" I started for Kisa cuz I love Kaoru, but Melissa is hilarious and reminds me of... well... me ;)

D'awwww.
but sometimes I think that Kyoya actually has some small feelings for Kisa...

I'm listening to "Please Don't Say You Love Me" by Gabrielle Aplin. I think it's quite fitting for this story. :)

*dies laughing*
This is what I get from rereading, xD This story never fails to amuse me!

-grin- I knew everything would turn out alright inthe end!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DAMN YOU LEONARDO! YOU SCUM! NO, TO CALL YOU SCUM WOULD BE AN INCREDIBLE INSULT TO SCUM EVERYWHERE! YOU'RE LOWER THAN SCUM, THAN DIRT, THAN A SNAKE'S BELLY! YOU'RE…YOU'RE…YOU'RE NOT FIT TO BE FOOD FOR MAGGOTS AND YOU ARE AN ASSHOLE!
-that is all-

YES! YES! YES! DIE LEONARDO! DIE, YOU ARROGANT BRUTISH ABUSIVE LOUTISH
-hold on, let me get my Shakespeare insult sheet- DANKISH GORBELLIED POX-MARKED FOOL-BORN SHEEP-BITING SCUMBAG!

I really loved this fic! There are so few really good Mori/OC AND Kaoru/OC stories on here. Wish there was an epilogue though, to see where they are later, if Mellisa got to walk again, how all of Kaoru's fangirls reacted to him and Kisa..lol. But great fic! Good job :D

This is so good! ;_; So amazing, neatly written, heartwarming, amusing, and whatnot!
But I think you need an epilogue! It will be a better finishing to the story! Much love

This was a beautiful and amazing story, so first I would like to say thank you for writing it because I truly enjoyed reading it. I loved both Kisa and Mellisa, they are both amazing characters and I could relate to each of them in certain ways which is always a sign of a good writer when they can create real characters that the reader can see bits of themselves in. The ending was very sweet, but I would love to see a sequel, or maybe even just one chapter, an epilogue of sorts, just saying whether Mellisa ever walked again and what Kisa and Kaoru are up to. I think that would be very sweet. Whether you do that or not, the ending to this story was still perfect and I had a joy reading it. XOXO

DARN YOU LEONARDO! DARRRNNNNN YOUUUUUU! Ugh! The suspense is so intense! (LOL. RHYME!) CONTINUEEEE!

I hate this Leanardo guy already. GO DIE IN A HOLE!
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Got carried away there...
AWESOME CHAPTER!

Awesome story! I totally fell in love with Mellisa's character! :D I guess Kisa must be rubbing off of Mellisa! :D Awesome. "You're the girl you wanted to be a monkey!" LOL. Mellisa does know that humans used to be monkies right?! I love your story!

This was beyond amazing:) It's also the first story I've ever known to have two Oc's work so perfectly into the story without either being a mary sue. I loved both Kisa and Mellisa, so much that I'm more than a little sad to see this end. You made both their stories flawless, with just enough personality quirks and inside drama to make them worthwhile to read.

:3 This is a neat story.