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![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable story |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. I love the way you wrote that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahah oh very cute! I love getting inside Troy's head - and the song was really funny too. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, so sweet. :] Angelica |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is really good. and quite funny.. lol.. that uruguay/ U R GAY thing cracked me up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol i really enjoyed your story. I had a cool idea and was funny too. you did great, btw. becca.x *New story of my own - Gabriella, The Teenage Gyspy Summary: Gabriella is a traveling gypsy. Troy is East High's basketball superstar. When Cirque De Magical come to town it brings excitement, new friends and new love between two worlds that should never have met. TROYELLA. Chapter 2 Up Soon! Please Read and Review! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol this was really good:P funny too:P i love ALL of your stories:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() How cute! God, boys. So stupid. Uruguay...U R Gay. Haha! I'm gonna start calling people that! LoLz. This was a cool story! And nice choice of song! xoxo Mayara |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw this is really a funny one.I love it P |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this oneshot so much! but i do have one problem with it :(. It was a little hard to read for me. Maybe you could center it or space it. I really don't want to be mean, but maybe space next time :D! -Caitlin:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ADORED THAT. Absoloutely adored that. great work. |
![]() ![]() um, okay so... i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY like your oneshots. I LOVE THEM. HOWEVER, i'm so sorry i didn't like this one at all:( i dont like first person and i found the first part really long.. the introduction or whatever. and (this isnt as important)i like it when troy is the really sweet guy and he wasn't as sweet or whatever.. (but that's my opinion) BUT i dont care because i still LOVE your stories and oneshots so whatever, no biggie! Plus, maybe it's just me... so yeah, i'll wait for you to write the next oneshot and i'm sure i'll love it! |
![]() ![]() loved it! you write in first person really well! |