| Reviews for Finding A Home |
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  ANONYMOUS chapter 9 . 6/20/2016 CONTINUE TO POST. |
| ANONYMOUS chapter 10 . 6/20/2016 CUTE. |
| Kilala chapter 10 . 8/27/2012 Could you plz make another chapter. Ya know, where the kid is born. I have a few good names, here they are: (if it's a girl) Blaze, Silver, or Reba! (if it's a boy) Jet, Avery, or Gerowshi! And there you have it! My ideas! Hope you like them! |
 xFlipJamsx chapter 10 . 1/19/2011 please udpate the story. i really would like to know what happens. |
| brown phantom chapter 10 . 7/23/2010 I'm surprised to find this story here. I saw it once before on another website I can't find again and thought I might never get to see the end. Glad to know I can read it here. |
| starfire1994 chapter 10 . 5/2/2009 please continue i love it later starfire1994 |
| EclipseIllusion chapter 6 . 5/2/2009 Just for future reference, you aren't supposed to have lyrics in your fan fics. It goes against the TOS. This again seems somewhat out of character for me, but that's just me. I'm not rying to hurt your feelings or anything. I apologize if I did. ~E.I.~ |
| EclipseIllusion chapter 4 . 5/2/2009 This is okay. I do have a few issues with this story though. One of them is the use of Japanese words in the story such as domo, onegai, hentai, etc. While I know that these words were used throughout the Japanese version of the anime, and that they are commonly used in this particular fandom, personally I wouldn't use them. Using these words when the story is written in English takes some of the appeal away from the story for some readers, and often adds somewhat of a childish theme to the story, in my opinion. Secondly, I wouldn't suggest doing little authors note throughout the story. Even if they are in parentheses. Third, also Inuyasha seems somewhat out of character, or at least to me. Fourth of all, you don't need to bold print or write in all capitals to show emphasis or emotion. You can just use a word like shouted or screamed with an exclamation point for anger. For emphasis you can just use italics. ~E.I.~ |
| WyldClaw chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 Sniff. Inuyasha's memory of his mom's las moments made me tear up a bit. I felt so sorry for him-he was only five! Please oh please continue this wonderful fic. i want to know what happens |
| Feathersong chapter 9 . 6/3/2008 UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON! hugs, Feathersong |
| jordan chapter 9 . 8/10/2007 I love the stories.I hope you make more if you did please email me,and tell me how to get to one more thing.I think it would be better with more lemons.I Know you said you don't but please try ! |
| Tempest78 chapter 9 . 8/10/2007 nice job. |
| Feathersong chapter 8 . 8/6/2007 wah! *cries*wah! update *sniff* please! |
| flamingo174 chapter 8 . 8/6/2007 aw man that was not nice but love your story update soon! |
| COAIM chapter 8 . 8/4/2007 keep writting! |
