| Reviews for The Last Kryptonian |
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   highlander348 chapter 5 . 6/24/2019 story sucks! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/21/2017 Good good |
| SciFichikie chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 As an avid fan with a tattoo of both the symbol for home and the house of El I really wanna know what happens next... So like everyone else is suggesting where's the rest of this story? |
| Hildolfr chapter 4 . 4/17/2016 If the SGC is fighting Anubis then Tel'c should already have his gau'old removed and using the synthetic drug derived from the Tok'Ra. |
| King of Atlantis chapter 5 . 6/17/2015 Will you be writing any more to this story? It's great so far but i really want it to continue please |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/15/2015 Are you going to continue this story? |
| sportytc chapter 4 . 7/27/2014 Just wondering if you are going to continue on with this as I would love to read more. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/15/2014 great story please continue writing i am really enjoying this story it is really great!This is One of the best stories I've ever read |
| sportytc chapter 5 . 1/14/2014 Hi just wondering if you were going to finish this story of and if so would you please contunue on with is as i would love to read more. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2014 can you tell us readers how chloe is going to react to the news about SG1? |
| jon chapter 1 . 11/14/2013 I like your story line and the mash up you have chosen. Your Clark seems a bit on the wordy side but your painting pictures with words so that a real small thing to be complaining about. I really like how you got Lana and Clark back together, good job! I just recently watched some episodes from the superman TV show from the fifties, their charatizations were way out there even far off from the comic version almost a bad parody of the original story line. I like your version of Smallville it would be real cool if you added more chapters to the story line. There are all sorts of way you can continue the plot line just don't jam too much in a chapter like one villain per chapter or reveal per chapter. Keep up the good work! |
| MBScavenger1498 chapter 1 . 10/27/2013 Hm... This is pretty good, definitely better than most of the stuff on this site. Still, I fell like your sentences and dialogue are a bit long-winded. Clark especially seems to talk too much. Unless he's extremely uncomfortable, he tends to be direct and not extremely talkative. Not to say people shouldn't talk at all, I just think a lot of the dialogue was a bit redundant. That's not to say I don't like the story, it's an interesting concept and even having never really watched the show itself, this has me interested in Stargate. More commentary as I read, Scavenger |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 Please continue to post this story, it is a great story! are you going to bring in the other types of Kryptonite and the other super heroes, like Flash, Green Arrow, Fish-stick (Aquaman), and cyborg? |
| Bluesnowman chapter 5 . 8/19/2013 Wonderful story I do hope against all likely hood that you continue it. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/29/2013 More chapters for The Last Kryptonian now pleas! |
