It's all some old bull shit

Good and smooth.

Keep continuing with the sequel, this is good.

This is good, waiting for sequel!

VERY GOOD WORK KEEP IT UP OK AND YOU ARE RIGHT IS BETTER THAT THE FIRST TWO

Ha, that was funny, romantic, and (the best part) bloom was definatly NOT the center of attention! :)

Thank you for writing this!

It was very good, and I enjoyed it, BUT, there were A LOT of mistakes...spelling, grammar, the sort. I kindly suggest that you proofread your work for any mistakes before publishing it. Yes, I know I must sound like a teacher, but I would prefer reading fanfiction that is so creative that I can see it happening. Anyway, keep this in mind while you write the sequel.

Best of luck,

avatartitansgurl8

Nice going on the "Sky is cute" thing Girl!

write some adult themes about stella and brandon make it loong a chapter, two or three. since noone had seen any adult themes in a story about them. it would be good. you can do it.

i dont think bloom shopuld be so stupid because she isnt stupid, she doesnt drool on pictures of sky...AND IN A SITUATION SHE WOULDN'T BE THINKING ABOUT WETHER OR NOT SKYS CUTE! but besides that good storie

I loved this chapter so much!

You should make a sequel!

I really love your work and hope to see more of it!

Sincerely,

RCB (Rainbow Colored Boredness)

Very nice, well glad u dident stop, a very good story and with G she just likes Flora Helia fanfics and is ubsesed with their pairing. (trust me, i'm her sister.)

you should keep writing. it is a really cool story so far! keep up the great work.

Great storie. LOVE IT!

This is amazing! Keep up the good work!

(And yes, Bloom is an idiot.)