Stumbled across this story and would like to say that I am enjoying it. I did check out your bio and am sad the story isn't done but can accept that life happens. Will be adding this to my story notifications just in case. :)

Man I forgot this fic for aaaaages, glad I found it again, even though it's been nearly six years since an update! Still a good concept, and what's been written is still a treat to reread. :3

Oh god, I wish life wasn't interfering with you finishing this...

It is absolutely, heart-wrenchingly beautiful! So much so, I cried. I'll certainly add it to alerts, despite the time I may be waiting, but if the possiblity presents itself...I IMPLORE you, please finish.

On another note, I can only hope that I can become half as good a writer as you. You've done such a beautiful job on your stories (Jumping At Shadows is what introduced me to you)! As it is, I'm scrolling through your stories and reading those of the fandoms I'm familiar with.

Thank you for writing!

This is so beautifully written! Please, I know you havent picked up this story for a while now but can you please continue this? I would really love to continue reading this wonderful story. You wrote the characters so beautifully. Yami, Yuugi, Honda, Jounouchi, Anzu, Ryou, Otogi, Shizuka, Sugoroku, Michiko, heck, even Dark Bakura there as well, goodness, I really hope you'll keep up the great work! I'm really worried about Yami.

Your Fan,
Mayonaka no Sasayaki

I remember reading this fic a long time ago. Sure wish you had continued it : / It still is one of my favorites :3

It's sweet that Ryou is offering to share Yami's pain. Are you going to continue?

Aww!

That's it? And it was just getting good!

This is an amazing piece, DragonDancer, and I hope that once real life calms down for you a bit (and having my own medical problems, I know what it's like), you'll be able to finish this (and the DP crossover)...Although judging by your profile, it seems as if you're not that into YGO anymore, are you? That's too bad...but hopefully someone else is willing to pick this up even if you don't finish it...

Great work!

P.S. And I think you're right - family is not defined by blood and marriage alone. These guys certainly portray that, don't they?

And yet another surprise...Dark Bakura willing to help Yami (if only for his own selfish needs).

But exactly how can Ryou sense both Yami and Yugi? Does it have something to do with that piece of the Puzzle that Yami Bakura put a piece of his soul into?

Wow...

I love Ryou to death, but I really would have never thought of this happening. So touching! (And no, I'm not saying I "ship" it either.) Yami does really need someone to be there for him, and when Yugi can't do it, then I guess Ryou's the next choice. )

This chapter was really powerful. Thank you for giving Ryou that strength to support Yami.

Otogi - lt took me a minute to figure out who that was. I'm use to the English names and that one just threw me off lol. but I jknow who it is

NOOOOOOOOO! Update reeeeeeeeeeally sooooooon!n! This is so goooooooood

-Kairi

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

and it's true, I would bet that bakura would do exactly that for yami if that were to happen.

But I feel sorry or yami! Having to feel every pain and touch on what the soca are doing to him and yugi! :(

-Kairi great chapter!

Oooooh okay. I understand Ryous roll. yay! Sorry bout the review before, lol

-kairi

Okay I don't understand. What did Bakura have anything to do with this? Like I cam tell he's going to have a role on the story but why'd you put him now? . . -kairi

Okay, I realllllllly likes how you added yugis mom into the story. Every story I read, they never really talkbabout rhe mom. And i have to thank you because soon when I'm writing toy own story, I will have to add his mom. Now or won't be to much as a challenge. Aaaanyways, great chapter! -kairi

Okay, i'm kind of confused. This wastlking about yugi, right? This was in his point of view? Sorry I just kept getting confused. And if this is yugi, he doesn't remeber what happened. ( I understand that at). -Kairi