Well that was amusing but no NaruSaku lemon that sux

Well I must say that was interesting still disturbing though he's fucking a clone of himself in the sexy Jutsu, the Kurenai part was amusing and taking Shikamaru away huh that was amusing the Sakura part at the end was sad I wonder what will happen next hope Sakura won't get bashed to much

Well I must say damn Koyuki then her maid then Naruko then Kyubi damn he's been busy lol

Continua please

J'aime bien beaucoup n'

Kurenai shikamaru intéressant.

It would have been nice to see any of the actual lemon scenes between Shikamaru and Kurenai, because even though this is my first exposure to even the simple thought of those two being together, I’m finding it much hotter than I would have imagined (had I previously thought about it, but still).

HOTT! Keep going! Are Yukie and Chie pregnant? Is Naruko? Will Sakura join in the naughty fun and become pregnant as well?

That Omake eas fucking hilarious.

That omake should totally be cannon to the story

Excellently done first chapter, loved it. I really hope to see Jiraiya taken down a few several pegs.

Great story so far! Good job with this chapter! Please do continue soon! Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks, and have a great holiday season as well as year!

ok first chapter was hot and then this summons business is just weird...but also kinda hot...lolx what's gonna happen upon introducing Yukie?

okay don't really know what to think keep it up

Haha, this is an excellent writer.