Fucking loved it

Oh my goodness I cant even...

I loved that So much.

The way you described things, Jason's attitude and just...

Everything ;A;

I liked it a lot. It was well written and had a nice feel to it. Best dc slash oneshot i've read so far.

ooo. *wide smile* I like that alot. n.n happy face

This is really hot and believable. I've been looking for one like this. The last line and the phrase "hurts so good" both kind of kill the mood, though. The rest of the writing is too good for those bits. It's not that I doubt his passing out, especially since you said he was tired, but...i don't know, it's just the phrasing.

Generally excellent. Yum.

Oh, btw, I like that Jason totally wants it and is even somewhat in control. I can't handle "no daddy, please" type stuff. This is way more interesting.

Wow, just 2 words:

Fucking perfect!

That was beautiful and intense, and you caught them both so damn good. Great job!

Lum~

FUCK GIRL. SO HOOT AND SWEET. IN ITS OWN TWISTED WAY, OF COURSE :D LOVED IT. GREAT. LOVE, PAD.

Like it :D

*jawdrop* *dies* holy shit... FCUKING AMAZING! XDD

the intense-ness of this is just so deliciously brutal, can't help wanting more...

Aw. (Is that the right expletive?) But still, aw. Cute!

O.O..omgosh...*passes out* XD loved it!

keep on writing,

luv-blonde-bunny

I love Jason / Bruce fan fics so I am glad taht you write some. the are well written and I realy hope that you will write more

w-o-n-d-e-r-f-u-l, really. Character interaction is wonderful.