cool but you spelt "Fleur's" Name wrong it isn't "Fleer" It's "Fleur"

I HATE YOU ,you are a meanie. you made fred and george die. pretty good story. except for the killing :

funy, but... you do realize that you spelled almost EVERYTHING wrong?

im not sure if anyone said so, but Fleer's name is actually spelled Fleur. Sorry. I hate critisizing people. I like this story alot. nice idea.