I just had to say I really enjoyed your Rikkaidai hospital pieces too! It's a long shot but I really hope you make more :D

What illness does he have in the first place

i enjoyed this story a lot- finished in one sitting. a bit of an abrupt ending, but this is definitely going on my favorites list.

Bloody brilliant. Marui always has such an interesting take on things.

Aw, it's over. Sorry for not realizing earlier. I kinda forgot. Hehe...

Ensure withdrawal. Priceless. However, you could have described Yukimura's hunger more vividly- a stomach rumble, maybe? Cripes... (You really like that word, don't you?)

Love ya. I don't know, this story brings you charisma for some reason. Maybe it's because I don't read Friendship at all. It gives me a little bubbly feeling inside. Anyways, good luck with whatever else you decide to write!

This is so cute! Ah, I adore the epilogue...some of the earlier chapters seemed so...I dunno, dire...it's good to see them all bantering now.

Great story! I adore your characterization. Looking foward to more stories from you. :)

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As always, you managed to put the team characters in the right perspective (whatever that means). I'm still impressed by the way you keep everyone in character and the humor is better than ever. _ Thank you!

-snugs 'Mura- Cute and wondrous, as usual.

mou, poor yukimura-buchou.

lols 'Ensure withdrawal'? xDD

this was such a nice ending :D

I really loved this story! keep up the great work!

A food-deprived Yukimura is so much love! xD He's just too adorable! Ensure withdrawal *rofl* Goodness. I can so see Marui gawking at him while he complains about his hunger pangs. ()

This last chunk was just too wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it! Ah, Rikkai is just so much love.

I really, really love your Rikkai, Ara-san! You really write them well! Not only the characterization, but the dynamics were amazing! They're such a close-knit group and it shows in the way they relate to each other. I love Yukimura's birthday party! Akaya's so cute! Marui is so adorable. And everyone's so IC. And yeah, I really love your Yukimura. You got him down pat!

Yukimura loves Ensure. xD He has weird taste in food. (); And yes, I believe Sanada's a secret Ensure drinker too! xD

Somehow I find the image of Yukimura sitting on a table really cute. ()

You already know how much I adore this piece, but let me say it again. I love it! :D

Yeah, anticlimatic, but it kind of droned on and on... nicely. Both sempai and senpai are correct really- there's no direct translation in romaji, although I personally prefer senpai.

When Yukimura was sitting on the bench, he looked so skinny! I was like, F #$? He and Marui need to change stomaches sometime... :P

Lovely, as always. You make them memorable without tennis. Hm, makes me almost wish I was hospitalized. Haha...

He actually likes it... P SO CUTE! I love your Rikkai, dear. Yukimura is so... real.

Oh, one little mistake. "and Yukimura’s discharge from the hospital was actually in site." 'Site' should be 'sight.'

Yukimara-buchou back on the disgusting protein drink? That's surprising, keep up the good work.