I'm reading this at work and struggling so hard to not start bawling in public. Susan's story is always so beautiful and tragic. You do such an excellent job of capturing that tragedy, not just in this but in all your stories. Thank you

You have a rare talent - a true teller of stories. Thank you very much for sharing your world.

Now, if you could be persuaded to pick up your pen again...

*cries*

Damn you. You made me tear up. ;_;

I was crying so hard. You write beautifully. It didn't help that You'll Be in My Heart from Tarzan was playing; it made the story seem so much more sureal

Crying, just... so beautiful. Love how Tommy seems to replace Narnia. Also love the bits with the vets and how she reacts to being called princess.

Lo-o-o-ve. And I don't even like Susan. Everything about this fic was amazing. I really loved the dream with Lucy at the end, it was so very Narnian. "They have a daughter, a blond-haired, bright-eyed girl Susan names Polly, and Tommy calls her Princess. It doesn't bother Susan—after all, princesses are born, not made." Exquisite. And your ending - WOW. Incredible. So well done.

"Something true..." "My story..." Loved the ending of this, truly. Thanks for sharing )

Oh my word. I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this. This is amazing. A beautiful insight to what was going on in Susan's head, one of the unsolved mysteries C.S. Lewis gave us. And you write so well. Thank you so much for sharing this!

-Desi Jo

I am in floods of tears, and my keyboard is blurry, so I'm surprised I can even write this. That was so beautiful.

This is a really nice story. It's interesting to see Susan have a life after her family's death, as most fanfiction writers don't seem to touch on that. :)

I really really liked it

Great problem of Susan fic, and I love how you intertwined bits of the other stories into it. Susan's 'chance' to be part of the train wreck does not seem the best choice in light of her new family, and yet her loss is very deep and poignant.

Oh like how you tied in Su and Lu talking that is in the other story into this one too.

I like this one-shot, I think I've read it before. Very good.

Aslan's Blessings,

~Fierce