| Reviews for The Afterlife |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 12/24/2019 ookayyy this is waay too ooc, i dont think i can finish it |
 dragoon109 chapter 2 . 12/30/2015 sirus should NOT be in heaven. none of the muaders should be! |
| dragoon109 chapter 1 . 12/30/2015 sigh you know the thing that bothers me is " you have made it up" part. why would snape need to be forgiven at all? lily is at fault too. |
| dragoon109 chapter 10 . 4/17/2015 harry was a bit like his father in school though |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/30/2012 This is so out of character I can't even finish the story... please pay more attention to the characters and how they were really portrayed, and think of how they would all actually react in this situation. This just looks like you wanted Snape/Lily to happen so you blatantly altered the characters to fit your needs. None of them sound like themselves, not in the least bit. |
| hello chapter 4 . 5/9/2010 this is so sad i started to tear up which is a great feat because i am a lily/severus through and through |
| excessivelyperky chapter 11 . 11/19/2009 Personally, I thought your characterization of James was spot on. Sorry you're dropping this-I'll go read your other stuff. |
| iloveyou21210 chapter 11 . 10/20/2009 I dont think it's ridiculous, I liked it! :D |
| Luna Lark chapter 11 . 9/17/2009 it was pretty good-and i say this honestly because james is one of my favorite charcters and to see that happen to him was kinda wierd. but it was still really really good! |
| Luna Lark chapter 4 . 9/17/2009 awe! that's kinda sad how easily lily broke james' heart like that...poor james...but that's def good news for severus... |
| TitanNegro chapter 11 . 9/2/2009 Great fic,even been a little OOC,was good,and i don't realy like james to...XDD |
| anonymous131313 chapter 10 . 8/14/2009 Thanks for commenting my story(: And I love yours! I've always wished Snape and Lily would get together. And the endings not lame! I think its sweet, Snape's so much nicer in heaven! |
| attyfan chapter 11 . 7/31/2009 I enjoyed this story, but I never liked James much, either - I think Lily would have been furious if she ever discovered that he had lied to her (pretending that he wasn't picking on Snape, when he still was). |
| attyfan chapter 6 . 7/31/2009 James is acting like the dwarves in C. S. Lewis's "Last Battle" - even in heaven, they can't get past their earthly hates. |
| pstibbons chapter 5 . 5/10/2009 best line: "But you didn't love me enough? You loved Harry more than me and you left me. Lily, I'm not blaming you for what I did, for becoming a death eater, for everything, but if you would have stayed with me, if we would have been together, I swear to you I wouldn't have become this!" he pointed to his left forearm. |
