Reviews for The Broken Trinity
Guest chapter 10 . 1/20/2018
Why! Why couldn't murata and wolfram be together i love that couple
bobbyneko chapter 10 . 8/7/2015
Great story! I was rooting for Murata x Wolf the whole way though…
bobbyneko chapter 6 . 8/7/2015
Ooh nice ending sentence!
bobbyneko chapter 1 . 8/6/2015
Lol i like the characterizations youve given then, especially the scene where Murata finds Wolf in the baths
ShadowHart chapter 10 . 8/11/2014
well... reading this story makes my heart cried... its so awesome...i love it... so adorable... i came to a realization that Wolfram and Murata can be partner and be a cute couple :) also its my 1st preview... hehe keep it up author :)
vaetta chapter 10 . 6/10/2014
i was planning to write a long review raving about how wonderful this was
but i realized that there are no words for how much this story has affected me emotionally.
This was beautiful. And perfect. And heart breaking, so so heartbreaking. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS
BringOnTheChaos95 chapter 10 . 3/26/2014
I loved this story as much as I hated it. Tears are running down my face right now, damn you!
Even though Wolfram decided to be with Yuuri I just can't accept it! All I can think about is how Yuuri treated Wolfram before, and I understand why he was hesitant and everything, but Wolfram didn't really deserve that treatment. And even before Yuuri realised he loved him, he didn't dissolve the engagement which meant Wolfram grew to be even more in love with him which put Wolfram through more grief! So I kinda hate Yuuri right now.

But Murata, oh, after reading this even writting his name is making me burst into tears. I feel so sad and upset for him. I was really rooting for him to get together with Wolfram in the end, they just acted so much more relaxed in each other's company, I mean they pulled off pranks together, cuddled, I have hearts in my eyes at the thought of them! There was no strain between those two!

I've got to admit, coming to the ending, I also started to hate Wolfram a bit, but that maybe because I love Murata so much and hate the fact Wolfram chose Yuuri. I just keep thinking of how Murata reacted so strongly to Wolframs almost death and that when he got him back he lost him again, to Yuuri. And Yuuri reaction to Wolframs almost death wasn't even on the same level as Murata's! It was barely anything! And I'm crying again! Poor Murata and Wolfram! I just love them!

Even so, this was a beautifully written piece of work which I thoroughly enjoyed! So I applause you and thank you for writing such amazing work :)
AZ1087653 chapter 10 . 3/6/2013
This story made me cry, literally. I know everyone wants Wolfram to end up with Yuuri, though in canon it's debatable still if it will happen, but I actually prefer Wolfram and Murata, at least in the stories I've read. It broke my heart, similar to Hana Yori Dango. He has his husband, but his husband isn't his soulmate.

Wonderful story though. It was a brilliant read and I enjoyed it, even though my classmates now wonder if I suffer from some type of depression. Awesome job. :-)
Guest chapter 10 . 9/27/2012
omg!it wasnt exactly a happy ending!omg omg!i'm spazzing out so much that i don't know what to write!

omg!

your story is its both sad and happy at the same time!at the last 3 chapters i kept on thinking yuuri will give way for murata and wolf, but at the same time another voice is saying nooo (i am a YuuRam fangirl)!and a third voice is saying go MuraWolf!

the way you wrote leading up to the resolution was nerve wracking for me!
my mind is still spazzing!waaahhh!
ChimeBells chapter 10 . 9/18/2012
HOLY CRAP
I am crying so hard right now, OMFG! This is literally one of the best stories I've ever read, and I am just fucking SPEECHLESS right now.
THANK YOU so much for this wonderful story, even though I am now in the process of gathering the millions of pieces of my heart off the floor before they get swept away by the flood of my tears.
a fan chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
this is unfair! Murata and Wolf should be together (solely!)!
YeahYouWannaKnowMyName chapter 10 . 9/3/2011
I actually read one of your stories that isn't Ouran. I am shocked at myself, lol. But I really liked this story, it was so interesting. I could not figure out for the life of me how it would all end up. Your writing has, yet again, impressed me.

YYWKMN.
Reader chapter 2 . 2/23/2011
Murata and Wolf should be together here (in this story), it just make sense and feel about right. That's how I felt after reading this chapter. Really good story.
Reader chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Murata and Wolfram? They'd be lovely together! Never mind Yuuri. Anyway, the beginning is good and simple.
PuffinSunday Muffin chapter 10 . 2/5/2011
Whoa *eyes wide*

I admit that I cried over this story *sobs*

Why can't Murata and Wolfram finally be happy together! *Wails out of misery*

And the ending, I thought that if I was in Wolfram's place I would have decline Murata's offer. Because I think if Wolfram agreed he would have ran away with Murata not caring about anything else or he may possibly cry on the spot. But he did't, did he? You made Wolfram matured enough to accept Murata's offer and that will just make me cry even more.

You're a really good writer you made this a bitter-sweet ending *sniffs* *sniffs* for this story.

PS. I would never forget that soap opera thing! *laughs*
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