This was just so well written...I cried with Mohinder! That just sucks...wondering if there is a sequel?

First fanfiction ever to make me cry!

Oh godd - I HATE peter!

why the hell does he just ruin everything?

That was like...wow.

I feel so BAD for Sylar and Mohinder, I wonder what

happened to Sylar?

That's gonna annoy me for weeks!

AMAZING STORY! WELL DONE FOR MAKING ME CRY!

X

This is so sad at the end, but at the same time I think Peter and Mohinder should be together. Not Sylar and Mohinder. Well written.

No don't go with Sylar sgtay with Peter. Peter is the best.

Oh Gosh. Scary.

Wow, this is such a beautiful story. I hate to be left hanging here, but at the same time, some things are better left alone.

- is conflicted -

Either way, good story. :)

No! Please don't end it like this. Please *cries*

Ok so I actually cried at the end. I hate Peter... with every fibre of my being... He should curl up and die. Poor Sylar...

Incandescent! Hurray for your muse to return from the dead in such triumphant way. In a perfect world, nectar and candied violets would be fed to you by Mohinder and Sylar in a towel. Yes, just one towel.

::cries::

There'd better be a sequel.

I need a smiley for sheer awesomeness. It goes here -

Hot!, awspme job

Yay! You finished it! D

For some reason, that was very much *not* the type of ending I expected. It was very good, though, and I'm comforting myself with my belief that TRTR will have a happy ending, right? _

(Stupid Bennet telling Peter he was doing the right thing. I wonder if Peter would have been so reassured if he'd had to do it himself, rather than letting the Haitian. Poor Mohinder.)

I'd also like to take this chance to say that I really like all of your Heroes stuff. It's very powerful, and you're prolific enough to keep me addicted. p

If I may, though, I'd like to point out one little thing that I find distracting-the than/then deal. Thancomparitive, thenchronological. It's just a small thing that breaks the mood every now and then, but can be easily fixed.

WOW! I just read this whole story... now I'm late for work.. but it was worth it. This was great... twisted... but GREAT! very raw.. very passionate... VERY SEXY!

I'd take all three of them in a heartbeat.

Gosh... and what a tear-jerker of an ending!

awesome story, Maia's Pen

aw... that's so sad. you make me hate peter... but, this was fantabulous. i'd beg you to make a sequel, but that might kill the sweetly sad ending.

Oh my god, that was so sad! This is one of the best fics I have ever read, I love it!

Great job!