dude this was so good I’m actually shook ! I was entranced from the moment I started chapter 1

this was simply fantastic. every part of your story grasped my heart and squeezed for 100k words straight (im saying this as if it’s a measure of time even tho I read this in less than a day, which is a feat in and of itself)

I’m always late to the party when it comes to death note fics because I was so young back in the 2000s, but I’m nonetheless glad I stumbled upon this 12 years after it was written 8) I wish that there was a sequel, but with the way it ended I’m perfectly content.

thank you so much for this beautiful piece of art !

What L said about those men that tortured Kira was very Before Torture Kira-esque. Yet also very human.

BB?

I guess Rem couldn't really kill anyone to prevent Misa's death, because everyone heard Light [though, I don't see why she couldn't have killed the entire task force before it got out]. Maybe she's satisfied with knowing Light died...though with her eyes she should be able to tell that he wasn't dead.

Forgot to say... SEQUEL! PLEASE!

Holy. Im impressed. Never before have I seen such a brave writer XD: Multiple personality disorders (or whatevs) huh? I looooooved it!
Well, there are a couple of plot holes, like, whatever the hell happened to Kira? It would be nice to know when he blended with Kith, and how Kith would deal with such amounts of unprocessed pain, even if it's just half of it.
What happened about the other half of the pain he had to process (the actual experience of killing and not just the knowledge of doing so)?
Why would CIA go through the trouble? For that you could add something like we-have-already-tried-everything-to-kill-him or something.
Another thing that I noticed (and to this day don't know if I love or hate XD because... hurt/comfort) is that you throw around the 'he started sobbing' thing a bit too much, which makes the reader feel like it's not important. You could just say 'crying quietly' most of the time and to add a bit of more efect, say 'bawling' when it is really bad.
You also seem to forget you wrote about somethings, like when Pen told L he could give him trigger words, but L figured them out on his own, or when Light was said to always be hot and then that he was always cold.
For Wendy and Aiber... I don't get why they exist XD. I mean, I read it at 3 in the morning some times, but I couldn't make out any importance of them other than the comic relief and covering plotholes
Other than that, I loved how you executed the actual disorder of Light and how every personality was completely different and unique. Especially the difference in age and gender (feminineness? Lack of masculinity? You get it)
And geez did I love to see L cry. *fangirl war cry*
I would say something about LxLight making this story a bit not serious, but lets be real, that's exactly what I came here to see XD Im satisfied.
Good story!
(Btw... why is it called poison to the plate? Me is stupid. Me not understand. XD)

Light speeding over into the waves to rescue Bonnie, Sayu's death, Light's reflection on his parents, Light deciding he wanted to live, L snapping at the kids, Matt noticing when L didn't expect him to, Light seeing again in the end and L's tears, I love all the little details you add to make this such an enriching story. It would be great if you ever did decide to write a sequel, but even if you do not, would you mind writing a summary or notes of what you had planned/saw for them after this story? Thank you for writing. Your thank yous at the end were lovely because it was personalized and made me feel a little close to the story and the people that help support you to make it happen.

These revelations had my heart feel so heavy and sad. I don't remember reading things with multiple personalities so the interactions they are having with Kira's Light Yagami personality is riveting to follow.

This is exceptionally...I don't know but my mind is blown. This turn of events is considered science fiction(?) right? It is crazy scary. At least I am more trusting of Pen now.

Holy fucking shit, those sick fucks.

Wedy was angry on behalf of Light right? That gives her points in my books. Do you refer to him as Kira in your mind when you write the story? I like the support L and Watari are for Light and look forward to learn more behind what happened to Light.

Learning about L's past was fascinating. Light asking Watari to kill him made me scared for Light and want Watari to actually do it. I hate Nix for having to do with Light's trauma. Seeing Light have to go with the rest of his life by his pseudonym Kira feels desperately upsetting.

This story was so good. I'm a sucker for angst and hurt/comfort, so this fic was literal perfection. I see that this story was written in 2007 so that sequel likely isn't coming nearly a decade later. But if it did I'd be so happy. You're a brilliant writer, and I hope that wherever you're at now, you're continuing to share your story telling gift with the world. OK that was corny but yeah, thanks for writing this.

Too lazy to write a good review. But I liked your story !

Oh god what can i say. I love love loveeee this story. I especially love your Light (or kira or raitokun or lucious or kith or whatever else left in there, really) here. I've always had soft spot for characters with multiple personality disorder (yes i still call it by that name. A lot easier to spell xD). It keeps things interesting. I love how your Light is a bundle of MESS, with capitals M-E-S-S, here. It's tiring seeing that stubborn bastard always in control heh. And i especially love your L here oh my god. you make him so much more human here without straying too far from his character, it's refreshing. It's nice seeing him being given the chance to actually be human for once!

This fic is a masterpiece and i love every bits of it. If there's anything i'd change in this story however, i would make Light Yagami as Light's name eventually. Idk, that name just has the effect on me (name fetish, anyone?) and it would be nice to see him coming back to himself but aw the ending isnt actually an ending and Light is already beyond repair anyway. I kinda get your rationality here so yeah. Im so glad that this story actually has a solid plot instead of the typical two genii venting out sexual frustation to each other stories. Some stories are niceee but It gets old after some time : And honestly I'm half hoping for you to write its sequel and half hoping for you not to (bcs i will end up doing nothing but wait for updates seriouslyyyy I'm obsessed like that xD) but this is such an old story and i doubt you'll write one but thank you anyway for writing this :) now excuse me while i go back to the first chapter and reread hahah xD