Really good.

aww )': you did a great job portraying the heartbreak and love shared between fred and george..

I was holding back tears the entire time...and I downright broke down when I read the line 'Now wake up'. I loved Fred and George...George alone is no fun. Well, Fred alone wouldn't have been any fun, either, but...Truth be told, I hate JK Rowling for killing off all my favorite characters - Sirius, Remus, Tonks, Dobby, Fred...Who's left? I'm not particularly attached to any of the characters who survived, except George. And even he's not that attractive without his 'other half'.

This was beautifully written, and your profile tells the truth - you ARE great at description. Especially the first few paragraphs (I love the day Fred would have liked), seeing as the rest is mainly dialogue - well, monologue, actually.

omg tahts just depresing, ok? like, it was good and evverythig,but damn girl, that was sad!

man that is so sad...all the deaths were sad...well not Voldemort's or Peter's (at least not for me). Nice job. I like how you made George stumble, very realistic.

*wails* THAT'S SO SAD!

Fred was my favourite character in the book, and I was sobbing for a long time when I read that scene. I knew it was going to happen, but... well, it was terrible.

Actually, I think this vocalizes the grief that George must have felt quite well. Especially that Fred was his other half - perfect. Yes, I like it a lot. It's short but really gets it across nicely.

*beams* I think I might write my own interpretation of this mourning, too. Very well done.

-Kari

i am glad you were able to channel your sorrow for his death into something that wasnt destructive or moping(like i did:})

loves!

dina

That was a really good oneshot. I was crying by the end of it. Good job.

This is sad...very well written, though. I love it!

I really shouldn't review right now. I can't see straight through the tears. Beautifully done! It has been a long time I've cried because of a story.

that was amazing. i've been thinking of doing my own rendition, and i've beenn working on it, but yours was awesome! i loved fred and george and fred will always be in my heart. i especially liked the "jokes over" part, because that, i think, is kind of how George really feels.

That most definatly broke my heart...

I loved it... I cant stop crying...:[

Ugh Im so upset J.K killed off Fred. Of all the people...geesh it couldntof been Dean or Seamus... no...it had to be Fred -tear-

This was beautiful. I loved it and it's exactly as I would think of him saying if there was a funeral for Fred. It almost made me cry ...then I remembered. -Its just a book...(-cough orisit? cough-) So sad.

Thanks for the good read!

Ok, you've gone and made me cry now. I suppose that means that this was really good. I made me really sad, I still can't believe Fred died! Still, kudos for a job well done. Now, I've got to go find a tissue. Byes!