I know it's been nine years, but please please PLEASE update I need answers ahhh

This was awesome! I wish you would have finished it though.

I love the story please update soon as possible

Ahhh, now what an enticing story this is. And in character, too! I do sincerely hope this won't be getting deleted for lack of attention, would be quite a shame.

This story is so good and I've really enjoyed reading it... There's just not enough of it to read when it seems like there's still a fair bit of the story to go. I'm hoping that you're still resolved to start posting chapters again at some point, although I see that your last update of this story was a while ago... Please start posting new chapters again soon!

This was good, I liked it. Abrubt end, but life happens and we have to pause things...

AAGH! No! Am hoping you'll consider wrapping up this wonderful story, I have to know how Jack gets out of this one (and everything ends happily). Right?

You are such a talented writer; please, consider setting a few words to paper about our beloved #Caryl.

Ooooo! Now there's a twist! Very interested to see where things go with Cat Jones.

Awesome! I should have mentioned it before, but it is SUCH a pleasure to read a story well-written, with correct grammar and perfect spelling, things often neglected in fan fics. Add to that your entrancing storytelling and ability to paint a compelling scene, and you will know why I'm enjoying this tale so much.

While the POTC stories I wrote weren't Sparrowbeth, I think that fundamentally, the pre mise is the same...there was no powerful chemistry between Will and Elizabeth. Being who she was, or how they developed her, it seemed strange that in the end, she'd be content to return to her old life and not pursue a life aboard a ship. She was shortchanged in the movies, but happily not so here!

I can feel the heat from Jack's cabin growing. A storm is most definitely coming! XD

Ah ha! Now what, Elizabeth? Going to have to choose, methinks.

Ooooo! Love it! Part of me (well, most of me) is hoping Will doesn't return, but I guess there wouldn't be much of a story without confrontation, huh? Your writing pulls me in so quickly, and the scene you set is so easy to imagine. Well done!

You have a very natural way with Jack's dialogue - you've captured him so well, I can actually hear him saying exactly what you're written! So well done :)

Oh, ending on such a cliff-hanger! Any more forthcoming? Wish to know the outcome of our two pirates... if you will?