Reviews for Loose Lips |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2018 LOVED this story! I am really touched by each chapter! It's a really cute,funny and a romantic story. I hope you'll write more of tyhill, bcz YOU Are a GREAT author! Love your work... |
LoweFantasy chapter 16 . 11/9/2017 *squueeeeeeel* AAAAAHHHH! Now I'm going to bash my face against a wall from the cuteness overload and favorite this story, even though you may or may not even be on fanfiction anymore. |
Rob of Eternal Fire chapter 2 . 12/17/2016 alright not going to go into a full on review here as i'll save that for the final chapter, but i have one word for this story: Hilarious! seriously i practically fell out of my chair in a belly laugh reading it. from moments like the image of Tyson in a wedding dress, to Hilary's hair brained cover up plan, this chapter and the story in general are outright briliant. |
TTawfiq chapter 1 . 1/24/2016 MORE TYHIL make a fun couple. |
Ascension7 chapter 1 . 1/12/2016 Somebof the best TyHil works ive ever seen keep itnup ur awesome |
Little A Granger chapter 15 . 4/17/2014 I am so gutted you finally ended this story. :D It was amazing! I have never laughed so much in such a long time. It was really cute the way you portrayed Tyson in all this, its like another side of him not many authors/writers see anymore. But before I read your story, I saw your BIO and dedications at the end of your storys. I am so sorry for your losses, its never nice to lose such big influences in your life. I am going through that process right now of losing a loved one and it just eats at me everyday. But well done, you should be very proud! xx |
All and Sundry chapter 16 . 8/6/2013 Ah! I never got the alert about this being wrapped up but I finally just now got around to reading it and then rereading the whole thing over again. I loved it then and I love it even more now! Cute and perfect ending. This is one of my permanent favs. 3 |
codyhobgood271 chapter 4 . 4/18/2013 Good chapter it was very funny. Good job. |
codyhobgood271 chapter 3 . 3/29/2013 Hahahaha funny , funny , funny! Great work. |
codyhobgood271 chapter 2 . 3/29/2013 Man this chapter was so dang funny I laughed my head off! Great work. |
codyhobgood271 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013 Hahaha this was a great first chapter it was so funny. Great job. |
Haipa Ookami chapter 16 . 2/24/2013 . i dont even know where to start with this amazing story. I was literally laughing the entire time, your use of dialogue of PERFECT! The witty humor you use, i jizzed in my pants ( not literally ) Not only that, but you NAILED, and I mean FUCKING NAILED WITH A GIANT MAGICAL JESUS HAMMER OF ULTIMATE JIZZ-NESS, nailed every character 3 They were spot on and even the characters that you made up seemed like they belonged in the show. By Far my favorite fanfiction, even though I have more shows I like better. UGHGGHHHHHHHHH you are utter perfection. 3 |
Haipa Ookami chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 i cant stop laughing! this is so great! I love it! |
Ai Star chapter 16 . 8/2/2012 daaw it all worked out in the end! |
DarkDremora chapter 16 . 7/14/2012 *Applause&Whistles* Truly an amazing story! I loved every bit of it from beginning to end. I only hate that I wasen't able to finish reading this masterpiece until just now. :( But, alot of things had been going on in my life, plus my computer&internet gave out on me for a long time so, I honestly wasen't able to continue/finish reading this story. But, even though alot of stuff happened, and it took me a long time to finish reading this, I can honestly say this story was worth it all! :D I've read tons and TONS of fanfics here on FFN and this one is honestly one of my favorites! I just absolutely love everything about this story! Though, I was slightly dissapointed that they didn't kiss on the lips or cheek, or even just had it where Hilary's head was leaning on his shoulder during the epilogue, I still greatly enjoyed how this ended. The ending was perfect and much more believable both canon-wise and how that would've worked-out in a real life situation. You've done an amazing job w/ keeping everything true to how it would happen in the series, and kept all the chars. PERFECTLY IC through-out this entire story. To how their personalities were, to how they reacted to certain situations that happened. You definitely know your Beyblade! ;D I also read the reason behind your 1-year hiatus on this story aswell. I'm truly sorry for what had happened to both your Mother and Cousin. :( Losing a loved one always affects you in such a powerfully painful way that it just destroys you slowly&painfully from the inside-out. It makes you go numb and just pretty much question, and even hate, life. It can even make you both envy&hate those around you who are happy and enjoying life, due to all the bitter feelings inside. A lot of people give-up being consumed by their grief&sadness. The fact that you didn't, and even decided to continue working on this amazing fic and dedicated it to your Mother and Cousin shows just how strong&amazing a person you really are. I'm more than positive that both your Mother and Cousin are incredibly Proud of you. :) Well, I believe I've rambled-on long enough, considering how long this message is. Hehe. You truly are an amazing writer and this was just an incredible story! I truly look forward to more from you in the future! Good luck, Take care and God Bless! _ -DarkDremora4 |