Great story. Didnt see Sonic coming

That... stay... was... FUCKING... INCREDIBLE! This fanfic had everything, man! I nearly cried when Sonic had gotten bit by that damn zombie, and also, I like how you had absouletly no remorse for character death! Like, killing off the most famous Sonic character was a great idea, for that caused some serious emotional tension in the atmosphere.

Great job, I love you, and I think you should write a sequel. Thanks for writing the best story on

I read this Fanfiction way before i had an acount on this site and let me tell you i enjoyed every bit of it.

You have great skills at writing!

I'm glad you put Jet in this fic, not many people put him in their stories.

great ending but tails never told sally and you killed mighty,cody,and sonic three of the 8 survivers that there was now i am crying but when i am bord and i am on then i will reread this great story

from Sonadow wolf

now i am crying agein poor mighty and cream and also i hope cody tails and the others will be o.k and that tails keeps his promice to sonic (crying)

sniff now i am crying poor sonic and tails why?why did u kill sonic?

I LOVE IT AND SO DOUSE MY FRIEND THAT IS READING THIS WITH ME HE LOVES IT TOO!

I read this story last year and i just had to read it again. Brilliant man! Words cannot describe how great this is

This was a very good story and I may read it again.

I can see that you put a lot of time into this and tho the story is good I find that your a cold writer.

I'm not trying to put you down but you skipped the promise that Tails made to Sonic about getting the locket to Sally after he died. Rouge just seemed to forget about Cody after his death and Jet never once made a note on Storm,Wave or Espo for that matter.

I think all of those characters that were killed off should not have been forgotten buy Rouge or Tales.

I'll give you props on Sonic's death that whole part had me getting glassy eyed but you can't make Sonic and Tails brother ship bond seem that strong and then a few chapters later Tails never speaks of him again.

OK no more bitching

This story ruled ass so it gets a...

10 out of 10 on my OH HELL YA GAUGE!

P.S you bet I'm going to read more of your story's because if this got me to get glassy eyes I want to see what else you got.

Dude that's deep

i thought this story was pretty awesome. it had plenty of twists and turns (and violence) to keep me begging for the story to stop, but left me curious enough to read on. i loved how all the different characters inter-twined throughout the story (like how the rouge gang stumbled upon jet's alleyway, and how mighty and cream camped out at shadow's apartment.), and how all of them evntually met up with each other. the problem i had with the story was shadow's homosexuality. don't get me wrong, i'm not homophobic, it's just that i thought shadow wasn't the best character to be gay. nevertheless, i loved the story, and if it was rated on a scale from 1-10, i'm pretty sure you'd be in the double-figures. good job!

i love this fanfic. Nice work mate. 10/10.

I love a good survival horror story.

I cannot promise that I’ll review all the chapters this way. I can’t even promise that I’ll get around to reviewing this story again. But I have read most of it now.

A note on what influences my personal bias before I begin, it’s just so you know where I come from as a reviewer: I haven’t played much of the post-Sega Genesis Sonic games. I’m more of a fan of the old school. So I don’t know the canon personalities of these characters. I also don’t know which are canon and which are original. I don’t care about who’s paired with who, so long as it’s well done. Keep this in mind.

Prologue.

“Much disarray has never been encountered by the return of these said few.” I’m not sure I understand what this sentence means. There are a couple more minor mistakes, but otherwise the prologue does its job. A few needless words here and there.

From here on in I’m not going into grammar/syntax mistakes so much.

Chapter 1.

Some good characterization on Tails, Mighty, and Cody. Tails is blind to his mother’s fear of losing her son while he’s still only a child. Just joking. Well, maybe. I know you probably weren’t trying to be so dramatic, but reading this made me feel a little blue somehow.

I like how you explain Cody’s contribution to the team, and how attuned he is to visual detail and beautiful sights. If Cody had been deaf since birth, how would he know the Tap noise well enough to imagine it, or be able to imagine any sound for that matter? I have not read much documentation on how the deaf perceive the world around them however, so maybe I’m mistaken?

“Somehow, he had gotten a job as a security guard…” Somehow nothing. If exposition on how he got the job is not available (and not needed here IMO), then my advice as a novice would be to keep things simple and certain. Don’t let vague words or words that signal uncertainty creep into the narrative where they serve no purpose.

I think Cody’s interaction with Rouge could have done more to generate curiosity or anxiety in the reader. For example, in addition to complaining about a headache, maybe Rouge could have said something else Cody didn’t expect from a casual conversation. I don’t know what. Something to signal that things are not entirely normal.

Good setup on the Cream and Mighty scene. Some calm before the storm and the sweet, sweet childhood trauma.

The other scenes I don’t have much of an opinion on. They’re brief, introduce the characters and not much else, which was by design I assume.

Other than that, I think you didn’t need quite so much exposition to reveal the character’s situations. Just showing their actions and setting would have been enough to show Wave is a street gang member, for example.

You do begin to introduce some subtle conflict. Conflict on some level is always a must, especially for a first chapter.

Sorry the review is mostly negative. I’m not trying to bring you down, just point out things I know you can do better. If there’s something I’ve said that rubs you the wrong way, let me know. Consider the source: I’m just noob writer myself.

This story was so cool! It's too bad you left no room for a sequel, cause that would have been great. Keep up the good work!

That was it right...Okay NOW I can say that I hate it when good fics end and the other stuff that I said two chapters ago.