This was such a great story! I absolutely loved this one and the other one before it! Great job!

Oh. My. God.
This story was utterly... Unmistakably... Brilliant. I'm-I'm speechless. It just shocks me wave by wave, how many puzzles fits into place chapter by chapter. And the end, oh my God, THE END. It is just undoubtedly brilliant. I have never met anyone in my life who understood these time loops more than you. I cannot even comprehend how much research, thinking and plotting it took to figure it out. You, my friend, is the living example why I love fanfiction writers so much. Oh my God, these goosebumps are starting to hurt so much.

I don't even understand how could you write such a complex masterpiece in your teenage years. But one thing is for sure: You should never, ever stop writing. This talent, oh my God .. I want to read more from you. I want to find these kind of stories on the shelves of bookstores. I really, really hope one day we can find your books on the selling shelves.

Because one thing is for sure: You would deserve it more than many of those people's up there.

Ah! And the foreshadowing finally comes to an end! I knew it! I guessed who the world walker was the second he was mentioned. (No spoilers, I know how the app shows reviews when you click on a story). I spent the last two days reading through both stories. At times some things bothered me, like the thing with Sushi. But I’m glad I stuck to it. Also the Tobi thing was pretty clever. I’m glad I found this story. It must have been difficult coming up with a whole clan and their culture and their ehhh caste? (I have a better word for it but my brain doesn’t want to supply it for me) System. There was a lot of foreshadowing and that’s one thing I really enjoy. Especially since I can usually pick up on subtle things like that. I know others that usually completely miss it or misinterpret it entirely. Again, this is pretty a pretty cool story.

.. I forgot to mention I loved the way you incorporated the titles of both in the last chapters. It was just perfect.

I just finished this fanfiction in like one day and it was amazing. I loved the first part and the second. The way you planned the story kept me captivated and it was just so Wow. The ending I loved it was the best. However, I think there are a LOT of questioned questions.

What happened to Sasuke after what happened?

What happened with the nine tails and what was her plan?

What was that dream where she visited a grave of someone and saskue being there?

The dream she had with her being in the modern worlddoes it connect with her being a World walker?

What happened with pain and Yuki’s relationship?

Also, I didn't quite understand the relationship she has with Akatsuki and her father? Does she still not like Li? But with the ending of her children visiting him, it's not the case?

What will happen to the family she left behind as she became the world walker?

What was with the dream part with the lights?sorry if you have already explained it and I somehow didn't get it but... Yh

Also, the part where Tsunade told Neji, Hinata, Ino and the sand siblings to touch the burnt mark on the ground. Did they remember?

... I think there's more but, yeah the end seems very unfinished to me but I loved it. It would awesome if you created another sequel to explain what happens when she becomes a World Walker. I enjoyed both stories so much, it was interesting and so originalit fried my brain with all that mystery though lol. I'm so happy that i found this. I was reading and before i knew it i was near the chapter.

The couple Itasaku was so cute and adorable. I love their interactions and the way Itachi acted towards and their fights. Although i would love if you showed a scene of when he proposed to her, it would be awesome. But i think the in-between of when Itachi was going propose, they were in a kind of fight and you never really defined her feelings towards him as being apart of the Akatsuki and being in love with him.

I loved Tobi’s character and the fact you made him end up with inuka was so cute~ It would be cool if you did a one-shot of her asking him out.

I'm going to end my review here since I've written a lot and will be properly writing more if i don't stop. Lol. Anyways just wanted to say thank you for making the time to write this I have enjoyed it very much.

how would they be able to "choose" light dependency as a strategy? that makes no sense

That was beautifully written! I loved the ending although it was slightly predictable that she is the World Walker

you're a cliffhanger tease. and the end of this gave my literal chills. but still overall I love it and that ending left it wide open for so much more... and tons of unanswered questions... hahaha...

But, Yeah, Amazing over all. And the fact you warned the readers previously, that there will be no sequel to this sequel is a bit of killer...

PARDON ME PEIN?

Called it Rinnegan. ?

WHAT DO YOU MEAN? *falls into darkness to keep Sakura company* I was just wondering/wanting to see what if Tobi was just that...Tobi? AND THEN FAM CAME THROUGH IDC IF IT WAS "internet connections" 'TWAS FATE I TELL YOU! FATE! -Fate-'who keeps calling me?'

You should make another sister story where sakura is a hoshi with another pairing. I love all three of these stories and I feel like there is more that is yet to be explained. although I suppose it could wait until you finish the GaaSaku one. But please do make another one, as i said there is more yet to be explained

I liked this story very much! It was interesting and very well made. The end was perfect. The only thing I wanted to be able to see more was how she could use her black and white eyes. Anyway you made a very good job!

Whattaaa!
I know it!
She's gonna be the World Walker.
And something tells me that she had been the World Walker all this time! So that she pass it (the ancient woman) to her incarnation and kyaa~ this is the best though Hidan wasn't even freaking hella in here.

I did not get this.
It's either I'm slow or this is made to be confusing. Psh.
Did Konan take off her necklace!?
I hope not