It was great! I LOVED LOVED LOVED the point of view and the description of the untold events... The author did a really good job at making this readable. I give this 9/10

Wow, this is probably my favorite chapter so far. I'm usually not into lovey dovey fanfic, but this was written plainly from the POV who loves fiercely, and it's very powerful. Good job capturing that.

So... I'm sorry it took me 13 chapters to review, I just wanted to compliment you on this great story you came up with.
I knew I wasn't the only one who has fantasized about Jo being a witch having fun entertaining muggles.
But mostly, for the last few chapters, I've been blown away by the amazing way you've portrayed war- the feeling of hopelessness, sorrow and anguish is so tangible to me as I read these "pages". I don't think that's easy to accomplish but you've done it wonderfully, so kudos to you for that.
Never stop writing 3
- clesmalo

Looks like I lucked out and got to read the edited edition! Thank you for this great story! I've never really liked Ginny too much. She felt sort of blah and I could never figure out how she and Harry got together. Maybe I just really hated Deathly Hollows and transfered that onto her character? I feel like I understand her and she is much more "real" to the story. You made me cry several times. I still havent forgiven JKR for Fred. I refuse to accept it! It almost ruined the whole series for me.

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

That was so romantic!

Finally some happiness.

Snape is a tragic character indeed.

Reading about James and Lily is always a heartbreaking experience.

I never liked how Slytherins were treated in the books. It was a Gryffindor who betrayed the Potters and yet ... Slytherins aren't and weren't all evil.

If memory serves me right, Ginny wasn't that understanding when Harry broke up with her. I doubt very much she knew that much about Harry's quest but it is your story. I do believe with time Ginny got why Harry needed to let go of her.

It is very hard to like Ron as much as I do Hermione, Luna or Ginny. Ron is a very insecure and at times childish character. Ginny leading Dean on, not very nice. She knows perfectly well what she truly feels for Harry and playing 'boyfriend-girlfriend' game with Dean is rather shallow of her.

What a beautiful ending to this story, honestly, I started at the point they get together in the HBP part of the story (The Half-Blood Prince.) I'll try to go back and read the other chapters up to where I started at. Gotta say my favorite chapters were the Battle of Hogwarts. Loved this story so much even if I didn't read the first several chapters.

This is stories link is going in my google drive "Favorite fanfics" In order to come back to later.

This is a wonderful story full of emotion. I have loved every chapter of it, and the way you ended it was absolutely perfect!
Thank you for the time and effort you put into this story and for sharing it.

Ginny and Harry together are not bad, I can stomach it. Ron and Hermione however...