This is awesome, I spent the whole chapter "awww"ing and giggling _ Only thing was I got the impression that Jack was a total Doctor/Rose shipped from the beginning XD But that could have just been me.

A PART OF MY JUST DIED, VER. *shakes tissue you at you* SEE THIS? I'M CRYING.

Just so you KNOW, Epic Win on actually making me cry during a fan fiction. It's rare. Off the top of my head I count fifteen out of the HUNDREDS, no wait, THOUSANDS I've read in my time.

Also? I want your fan fic babies. No lies. 333333

Because somewhere along the way, she had reached right past his hand and had grabbed at his hearts, forcing them to beat again after he had flipped a switch and made them stop. - That line, right there, is so flipping Nine it's almost painful.

Damn it. I think I have to go watch S1 again. While wearing my leather jacket, 'cause, y'know, it's how I roll. Nine!Love.

Wait - strike that -

VER!LOVE

Apparently I'm going to read and review all of your Dr Who fics tonight. ;)

Another great, great story. I really love this one. I've always been a fan of fics that take place during episodes to tell us what the characters were feeling at that moment, and you've done such an excellent job of doing that. So beautifully in character that I just want to kiss you! The Parting of the Ways coda was heartbreaking and so perfect. All of them are just wonderful, but that one really struck me.

And then I ran out of chapters. :(

Can't wait for more!

Just discovered your fic and it's wonderful. I love your description of the Doctor's emotions. Just great!

(sighs) No, not everything you write is sad. In fact, i'm pretty damn happy after reading this! So great, it really was- I love how he keeps mentally corecting himself, seems very true. and an intersting scene to choose! I must say!

I'm so glad you updated this! Excellent title choice and great chapter... Hm, I'm looking forward to how you handle GitF...

excellent, can't wait for the next chapter- you do angst and romance very well. Story alert

"And he almost rethinks it – almost admits that the last him was right and he did love her and still does and Rassilon he just wants to snog her again and have her hair looking disheveled because he’s been raking his fingers through it and why doesn’t he just tell her she’s driving him mad and –"

Oh, for crying out loud, I love some Doctor Angst, but there needs to be some sweet lovin' soon for the poor guy! Sheesh! )

I love this! That was so well written, I can't wait for the next part.

You officially rock!

That was intresting I lovedd it both chapters were fantastic loks into his mind.

Maria

This was Lovely. *Huggles it*

-instantly addicted- This is beautiful. You've got Ten's character just perfectly. And I loved Nine's mental rant about gerbils... :P

Anywho, brilliant. And fantastic. There you go, two words the Doctor likes/liked to use. Don't you feel loved? Of course you do. :)

That was great i love the chapters and his inner workings I mean they are so right and so sad knowing what it all end in.

Maria

Excellent chapter!

Can't wait for the next part!