That was beautiful. I'm crying inside. On a side note I love the title 'the moon is rusting.'

It's rather poetic and I'm a sucker for that kind of thing.

i just read the sequel and the other story and i thought it was beautifully written! loved it. so much passion between the two -sigh

That was great.

Awesome start,I love it.I'd like to know where you going with this story,so please continue.

Loved this part: "And it felt like the first time he had taken flight – strange and beautiful, and unerringly natural and right."

Stumbled across this fic . Really enjoyed it. It would be nice to see this continue, but it does feel somewhat complete too.

Good job.

Rhea

I love your writing. It is just what I want my writing to be like if I ever do get better. Very thoughtful and I can feel the emotions as well as see the scene. Very nicely balanced.

Do write more.

Oh, and interesting final comment in your profile (C).

Great story,, Keep them coming... I like the way you are making this story line keep getting bigger. I now have read a couple of your other stories, great writing...Thanks,

Jack

A very heart warming story. I enjoyed reading it.

awh very sweet :)

cute story of clois.. love it