At first, I thought that they wouldn't end up together, but I didn't mind (that's the first tme I've EVER not minded that NejiTen didn't happen) because your style was AMAZING. * gets dazzled * And then the story did become NejiTen! I'm looking forward to any new fanfictions you post!

awhaaw!

that was adorable. -sniff-

so cute. amazing job. I can't beleive i just found this. :p

lovely story. _

THE WORST WEEK OF HER LIFE TURNED INTO THE BEST! :D see, it's yin yang. It MUST b balanced...

:D LOL :D LUVD IT!

really very cute! I love happy endings (wh doesn't!) very sweet!

Wonderful Job,

MP

Fluff! Fluffity fluff fluff! SO much fluffy sugar! So much cotton candy! My body can't take so much sugar all at once, so here I am, typing away! X3

A little spelliing check, and it's all good, but nevertheless, the plot is awesome!

Ja ne!

-Xanie XD

I love this. In all the Neji x Tenten stories I've read, none seem to have come up with the idea to have Neji make a deal with the clan so that he can have the choice of whom he wants to marry. So great job with that.

In some places, certain sentences and words just don't seem right, so I might do some fine-tuning if I were you.

Still, it's great!

Very cute. I liked the ending quite a lot. Good work. ;)

wow. WOW. you wrote that so well tenten's feelings. i especially liked the ending P great job.

This is not a flame. It's just a bit of constructive criticism. Because god knows this site needs more Nejiten fics in it.

So, first off - in narration, don't use words like 'wanna' and 'gonna'. Spell them out. Secondly, run spell-check, you've got a bunch of typos and misspellings.

Third, don't abruptly insert some Japanese into the story when "yes" would do much better. In the first place, the whole fic is in English so what's the point? Secondly, the use of "hai" is meant to show respect and obedience and using it to accept a marriage proposal that is supposed to be passionate and abotu the opposite of arranged is weird.

OH! I liked it! I liked it a lot! Yays for NejiTen!