will there ever be a chapter (17) with the wedge-tycho / winter-tycho reunion ? pleeaase :D

Update soon!

Update soon ! This is a really good story!

I really like this! I hope you update again soon! :)

Aww, everybody's really poor in this fic! lol Especially poor Tycho...

I'm enjoying the fic a lot so far :)

*Tear* The update was beautiful. I'm so happy you updated! *Breaks down crying with joy* Is there...is there any more? R2-D2106

Wonderful chapter. Keep updating!

This is really good! I can't wait for the next chapter! :-)

Davion looks great as a character! It's good to see an update, and Akiba is as good as she's always been. It's a very good chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next update.

It was great to find you had updated this story. This is one of my favourite Star Wars: XWing story and I was so pleased to find another chapter to read. Please post more soon.

Yeah! You updated- w00t! It looks very good, and I like Akiba. Keep writing!

Aw ww ww ww! Starbuck & Anders got MARRIED! That is just the sweetest!

Aren't Dee & Lee *CUTE* together? ? !

It would be nice if you'd take the time to thoroughly proofread. There are a lot of little errors that detract from the story:

"it's" when "its" should be used ("it is tight security"?), misspellings (Akirt'tar),

incorrect punctuation esp. with dialogue,

and strangely worded sentences

("There were no precious metals or any type of refined ore in this planet. . ."

-firstly, "ore" should be plural to agree with the first part of the sentence

["There WERE no precious metalS or ORES"];

secondly, if the metals & ores are "in" the planet as opposed to "on" the planet, they wouldn't be "refined"- refining comes *after* the digging and mining.)

("Quarrens didn't praise that much about Ackbar though most respected him."

That sounds very ESL. And you're missing a comma.

"Quarrens didn't offer much praise about Ackbar, though most respected him."

"Quarrens were too reserved to praise Ackbar aloud, though most respected him.")

("Oh," the sponging suddenly continued, "its okay." Um, the *sponging* is talking? If the sponging had stopped, then started again, it didn't "continue", it "resumed". And you have the wrong "its".

"Oh." The sponging suddenly resumed. "It's okay.")

Out of curiosity, what is a "water ventilator?" I assume it adds air to water? This is something so familiar to Tycho that he compares a voice accent to its sound?

Mon Cals don't have last names. Aaron Allston explained that he referred to Jesmin Ackbar as such to alert people to the relationship to Admiral Ackbar. See Ib, from the X-wing comics.

Why is calling oneself "Millennium Falcon" peevish? ? ?

YEAH! Glad to see you're continuing the story. I have a few fic projects that keep getting put off, too. ust keep plugging away and eventually... :)