The way's she dies are very heart wrenching to read. I felt a lump in my throat reading this chapters.

beautiful! im happy for mikan! but sad that natsume wont be able to see her as much..*sob* anyways awesome stori! plz update ur sequel soon!

This story was really original, I liked how you seemed to twist everything but yet fit it with the Gakuen Alice series. It was really good, the only problem was, the relationship between Mikan and Natsume seemed to blossom out of no where. This story was definitely cute, but it seemed as though their characters' didn't have enough interaction together to have felt such a deep love. If I wasn't super familiar with the series I probably wouldn't have caught on to or understood their relationship, but since I am a huge follower of Gakuen Alice. I ended up filling in the relationship holes with my own musings. Other than that this was a really good original story. I can't wait to see what else you have written.

Thank you! - Happy ending!

It's complete and I never knew! WAAH!

I'm gonna finish reading it!

sorry...

I LOVEE IT~~XD

have a TRIPLE choco cookie and i'll be looking forward to the sequel nee~ XD -hands triple choco cookie-

is the sequel out? because in ur profile it said heaven on earth ongoing. but i cant find it. i loved this fanfic! ur a very gewd writer! r u gonna be an author wen u grow up?

this chapter is so confusin. . mystic? elements? wat is mikan?

oo. kai is so mean! go mikan! slappin one of the most popular guys in tha schewl!

o! this seems really interestin! i wonder who did mikan land on.

this story is so sad at the start

i loved it

i love the ending as well

keep writing more stories _

wonderful...

ok, all i've got to say after reading the entire story nonstop is that it took an absolute genius to be able to write like this.

seriously. hopefully, you'll write more gakuen alice fics cuz u rock at them.

I really love this story. Thank you!

gyaa I loved this story I can't wait till Heaven and Earth