GO YOUICHI! I love youichi when he tries to get the two together

Thumbs up. Your story is very imaginative and the plot is very intiquet. I enjoyed role changes between the characters (especially natsume and mikan) and how family was a driving message in the story. I would suggest proof reading a little more. I could still guess and make out what you were trying to say but there were many times where a he was supposed to be she or seat was written as sit. Again this is ust something to work on I am not being mean. Overall I enjoyed the story and will probably read it again

You should so do ringo and narumi and Naomi and persona

i liked every bit of it. i can't wait for more. God bless you always. :)

Wow! I replay loved this story!one of the best I had read in gakuen Alice fanfiction!

i love the little hand games! its so cute!

This is for the whole story but I've just noticed that in the beginning it said the end of elementary school so what I'm saying is their already taking about babies when their 12? It would work if they were 16 or something and also mikan acting like that for a 12 year old surley won't happen with other people the same age but I still love the story I'm only sayin it would be more appropriate for the age to be higher

Awesome last paragraph

I've never seen the body flicker and technically all shinigami can flash step. Just not as fast as youroichi byakuya (kyaaa) and ichigo (kyaa more)

You kept writing globs so I thought they were blobs or something on their hands but I suddenly realized that it was GLOVES which made SOO much more sense hehe

kawaii

I don't understand the part where ringo change please tell me!

haha.. OMG! i really really love your story! it's been a while since i read this..but then i found out that this fic is already finished..i felt so sad...but i'm happy about what happened in the end..haha..there's got to be a sequel to this...haha...and i'm also hoping for Youichi's request..hahaha..

good story..i really love it..hoping that there will be a sequel to Sealed.. :)

more power.. :)

hey i LOVE ur story best of all its COMPLETE ive been reading since u had only 5 chapters this story was my first fanfic eva dat i read (well im going to now before u had not updated it )it got me hooked on fanfic and lead to mi makin an account w

Oh and i came to say, since im spanish that you said somethings wrong:

Sé, pero ella me forzó al profesor(2).” replied Mikan, should be "Lo Sé pero ella me forzo profesor"

“Lo que, pero intentan por favor refrenar a su uno mismo antes de que ELLA se vuelva(3).” said Narume dismissively, should be "Lo se, pero intenta por favor refrenar se antes de que ELLA vuelva

datz all i just thought u should noe i dont want you to feel offended or anything btw

omg! Youichi can not get any cuter than that!

awesome story!