Very moving piece. Characters in character, story moved along well. Your works always to move me in some fashion or another. No negatives that I could find. Thank you.

Beautiful story again man

Awesome idea.

Great reactions.

Your writing's excellent.

Wow! This is a masterpiece. Why so little reviews? Never mind here's mine.

Outstanding work!

This has always been one of my favorite stories, in the way the situation is portrayed, as well as Kim and Ron's actions. I think that this story really explores and defines their friendship, with Kim being the leader, who takes charge, but Ron supporting Kim, in more ways that she ever knows. He's her rock, her lifeline, and that is never more evident than when she has to deal with some situation like this.

When it comes to the entire story as a whole, the descriptions are what bring everything together, explaining to the readers just how strong each emotion is, how important every event is to their relationship, and to their situation. Ron is through her with it all, and these words just show how much he cares about her.

The ending is just as powerful, with Kim realizing just how blessed she is, not only in her ability to see, but also in the way that she has Ron with her, to support her in anything she does. A disheartening sitch for Kim to go through, but with Ron there beside her, there really is nothing they can't do.

Superb story,

The way you described in detail what happened and Kim and Ron's reaction to it was really good.

The emotions and the despair that both teens had was written out very well and made this a very touching story.

The fact that everything turned out well in the end made it all the more likable.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w

Good story all around I must say.

I think Kim got lucky by getting her eye

sight back. Some ppl, like my best friend

(who was born blind) aren't so lucky.

If you want a feel good kinda light hearted

sighted-person-gone-blind story, (and if you're

a fan) try "Blinded" (in my favorited story list)

it's a Danny Phantom fic.

Anyways, you are a good writer with a unique style,

and I like all your stories, I just can't review them

all.

Nero

A very gripping tale of two lovers and what they endure for each other. It is tense and thought provoking in its discriptions of both Ron and Kin's reactions to her sitch and how they handle both it and each other. Always a pleasure to read one of your stories.

Okay, so this story's over two months old and I've just now found it . . .

Beautiful! The KP section seems to have very best writers on the "cartoons" page and you are no exception! Bravo, sir . . . a testament to the genius of the KP show and characters, your love of and respect for them, and your masterful way of telling a story!

I look forward to reading more of your fics!

An excellent story, well written, well thought out, well done. You captured the concept of suddenly becoming blind and what effect it would have on the characters very well.

all i can say is wow...

amazing story!

Very nice story and I enjoyed how you protrayed the characters during this kind of story. Yeah blindness can be something of a witch, firsthand knowledge talking on that one and you never know how the people you rely on will really be there to help you until something like this happens. I found Ron's patience and support to be very mature and responsible, as well as showing the depth of their love for one another.

The only thing that I was mildly curious about, and it was a minor plot point, was it was mentioned early on that Ron was also injured in his leg and even had a limp, but his injury was never mentioned again. I was just curious, was it a flesh wound, or was it something more serious, and just got dropped because it was secondary in the plot?

nice one. very well written

Incredible story... That's all I have to say.

Can't think of what to say, but I'm clapping. Great story. Great detail. Please write more.