Wow, it's the end! I'll have to say, you worked well with the concept of this story and it definitely developed in interesting ways. Sure, some details got lost and the structure was shaky at times, but the way things built up at the end was quite well-executed.

Wow, this was a good ending. . .I didn't quite expect things to turn out this way!

I'm a little confused with what happens now though. Tony doesn't seem to remember anything, but somehow Tammie does. Is Tammie back in the past now, where Mamma Nita first gave her the pillow?

Mandy has quite an interesting backstory to her. I'm glad you were able to reveal some of her past in this chapter.

yay the extra chapter!

it was awsome!

hey! glad you put up the extra chapter! i'll be waiting.. for the sequel.

yeah well here i am again this time logged in lol, anyway i forgot to mention that my friend also liked this story *rubs the bump on her head that her friend did* she also said she can't wait for the sequel

heh heh, i'm too lazy to login...if you see, wolf-shadow6 that's me when i do login. but i loved this chapter and well i'm very interested to read the sequel.

whoah...i will be expecting it then!

Please make a extra chappie in Kai's PoV

I really like it _

man..that was so...GOOD!

UPDate soon!

LUV U!

PLEASE NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

the story was good, and you can add the next one if you what to.

so CUTE

I really love this story! You should totally put another chapter up! I wonder if Kai remembers...

add the last chapter!

for a miniute i thought that was all a dream...