I justeead the first paragraph of the next chapter...

YOU SCARED THE SHELL OUT OF ME! I thought you were a liar and I was so mad and and and... You're lucky you saved them.

... What ever happened to no turtle torture?

I can't believe you did that my baby! But great chapter overall!

-_- You seriously had to go there? Do you have ANY idea how tired and cliche "Light is good, dark is evil" has become? Do you? I'm sorry to say it but I am EXTERMELY disappointed in you (Because you totally care about what some random guy on fanfiction has to say). Light is not good. Dark is not evil. The simple fact is that light is simply what's known and dark is what's unknown. People fear what they don't know and therefor label it as bad even though neither is inherently good or bad.

Dammit, I've only read the first LINE of this chapter and I had to comment because that was NOT cool. Ugh, it's such a good story I don't know whether to be happy or angry.

No no no no no no no NO. I'm NOT ok with this. There are TO MANY CHAPTERS LEFT FOR THEM TO BE DEAD! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO I REFUSE.

Wow! What an amazing series. I will admit that I cried a couple of times. Keep this sort of thing up because you are an amazing writer :)
x

omg i so want to throw something at you right now you totally gave me a heartattack with how sad and depressing the last chapter was grrr still love the story though blah :p

i was reading this out loud because i do that for my cousin to get the picture but i hadnt read all of it in my head yet and so i got to leos good byes to his brothers and nearly broke into streams of tears reading it out loud its so heart breaking but amazign

im glad that their alive and that they made up
that last part about the prank was funny

scracht that last comment but I still don't like the way they went out in the middle of the story

the story is good but the ending made me sad and it wasn't fair that they went out the way they did

That. Was. AWESOME! I, loved it. You did a fantastic job on this one! I have to say that so far, these Blended Family stories are my all time favorite stories on FF! I laughed, I cried, I got angry at Shredder, it was all good! Can't wait to start reading the next story!

O-kayyy wow that was on HELL of a story there

I am very, very angry. I almost stopped reading because of how depressing that last chapter was and I could not stop crying! Why would you do that to me?!
-TerraPrime
I mean to say is that I was sort of upset about the whole thing and was greatly relieved that it was a nightmare. Please don't ever do that again.
PPS. GREAT story...