Reviews for Their Deadly Comminations |
---|
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2015 Oh, how I wish we had an epilogue! I would love to see Leo and Mike apologize/make up! It would be SOOO CUTE! xD Can you feed me my epilogue now that I fed you your much wanted review? Lol. xD Great job, as usual! Loved it so much, keep up the fabulous work! 3 |
staringatstars07 chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 I shouldn't laugh but the thought of Leo punishing himself with a kata is pretty smile-worthy |
jimintomyjams chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 So cute! Loved it so much! Are you planning to make a sequel, where Leo and Mike talk and everything when they get back to the lair? I would love to see that! Or have you already made one here and I haven't done a good job of stalking you and your work? ;D Keep up this awesome work! 3 |
flikaroo chapter 1 . 4/8/2015 Aww poor Mikey. It's nice to see a different side of Mikey, he may joke a lot but he is very sensitive to the moods of his brothers. And sweet Donnie to go cheer up his little brother. I adore brotherly fluff. |
Taisi chapter 1 . 4/1/2015 Everything you write is a national treasure. I can't tell you enough how much I adore your work. "Lucky," is my go-to feel-good fic, tbh, as well as the one about Raph's temper- I can't remember it's title off the top of my head. But the voice you give Donatello here is spot on, in my opinion. Reasonable as ever, but deeply compassionate despite that, and it makes for a sweet oneshot. Thank you for sharing! |
SakuBloss chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 *loving, adoring feedback happily given* :D |
hiccup-mikey-robin chapter 1 . 12/16/2014 Fluff fluff fluff :) |
guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2014 I loved this! You should make another chapter, so we can see what happened! |
crystalbladedragon chapter 1 . 5/20/2014 I LOVED IT! poor mikey, I can't help but feel so bad for him in this one :'( Any chance we can see a one shot of what happens after this? I'd love to see what leo says tho we all know how that would go. gaah, I love mikey and don moments *Squee* But I love mikey moments with his brother in general haha once again, awesome job :D |
Paradise2000 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013 That was fantastic! This is a really sweet story, short but good. The dialogue is excellent. Don's such a sweet guy. And Raph drinking beer when he's injured - LOL! Raph is so stubborn - even when he's ill! |
GirlforGod99 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013 cool |
TheThirdAetas chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 Donnie is always the voice of reason. Just because he is the voice of reason. I really love how this played out, it really showed the dynamic between all the brothers and the roles they play in the family. Thank you for posting this story, it was well-done and well-played. :) |
Just Black Sugar chapter 1 . 1/12/2012 Awwww! Leo's very funny! Punish himself... XD Just Leonardo Hamato could do a thing like that XDDD Donnie was fantastic, nice work, Don! And Mikey...you must pay more attention! You did a great work! Benny~ |
Megan McAlistair chapter 1 . 10/22/2010 why are all of your stories so cute? schmoop is such a perfect word for it I loved this one how Leo punishes himself with horrible katas so funny |
halfcent chapter 1 . 5/6/2009 This was such a touching story, one of my favorites. |