Reviews for Deception of the Worst Kind
hanihami chapter 16 . 10/10/2012
I really liked it
pervyprincess chapter 16 . 9/11/2010
This was so intense and emotional! i have never shed more tears then i ever had and that's proof how good this story is! The relationship between Lily and James was sooo immensely beautiful that it just left me breathless :) Great work!
TaraJ93 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
love your work. this is great!
Deadly Nightlock chapter 16 . 3/11/2010
Amazing. Wonderful. Beautiful. Just... Indiscribable! Thats the word! I love it so much. The last chapter is so well written. After the second last chapter, I thought that it would be impossible for anyone to be able to bring them back together, but you did, and its just perfect! Thamk you for making my day! :)
Silver Scorpion chapter 16 . 12/30/2009
awesome story
spannieren chapter 16 . 9/9/2009
fab story :)
ilo6409 chapter 16 . 5/8/2009
great story! a really interesting read! well paced and good characters!
HopelesslyLostInRomance chapter 15 . 4/22/2009
AH!

This is killing me! they have to get together!
HopelesslyLostInRomance chapter 14 . 4/22/2009
That was so sad! I'm crying! :'( :'(
HopelesslyLostInRomance chapter 13 . 4/22/2009
Jacob and Kim? WOW! Thats BRILLIANT!
HopelesslyLostInRomance chapter 12 . 4/22/2009
'“Are you in full working order?”

James who was terrified was thrown by the question; it had not been what he was expecting so a little baffled he eventually said hesitantly “umm, I think so.”

“Prove it!” demanded Emily

“Prove-? Umm… I’m sorry what?”

“Demonstrate you are in full working order.”

Sirius who had been watching this weirdly half formed conversation choked back a laugh at the absurdity of it all. Man this girl was a nut. He liked nuts.

“Okay,” said James slowly as he stood up from his bed before bending his knees so was crouched down and then moved his arms about wildly, looking to all the world as if he were a starfish trying to unfurl itself. He did this demented version of a squat come star jump until Emily finally said: “okay you can stop now.”

“May I ask why you made my esteemed friend here look like an idiot? Was it purely for pleasure or was there a reason?” asked a smirking Sirius.

“Lily asked me to make sure he was okay,” Emily answered as if that explained everything.

“And you couldn’t have just asked him?”

“Oh please,” she rolled her eyes. “When do men ever admit to being hurt? Besides, where the fun in just asking him when you can get him to do ridiculous things like that?” she bantered.'

LOL!

'“Sorry sweetheart, no kissing “The Potter,” he has enough girl problems as it is, but I would be more than happy to oblige you” he said winking.' LOL!
HopelesslyLostInRomance chapter 11 . 4/22/2009
srry i 4got 2 review... yeah ok:

Quote: “Prongs… James… Jamesie… Jim-Jam… Jamesie-poo… Potter!… Pot-Pot?…”

LOL!
HopelesslyLostInRomance chapter 5 . 4/22/2009
OMG it was James who kissed her? W-O-W!
HopelesslyLostInRomance chapter 4 . 4/22/2009
ok this isn't even from this chappy! LOL!

“Great Merlin’s dirty underpants—Evans have you finally decided…decided I’m an acceptable human being?” LOL! yeah...
HopelesslyLostInRomance chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Yeah James WOULD be stuffging his face... LOL! BRILLIANT! Ur obsessed with L/J arn't u?
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