Who do you think harry should of been with then if you have revenge because he ended up with Ginny.

Thank you I like hermione

I don't write just read the stories but if you could add my name if the petition is still valid

this was a great story and I truly loved reading it thank you :)

just a note that the spelling is APPERATE not apperanate :) but I am enjoying the story regardless just thought I would point it out

*Slim* waste, I assume? I'm sorry, but I just had the most amusing mental image of Harry covered in green slime. Don't worry, you're doing great.., it's just my inner grammar Nazi acting up. I so love your depiction of evil!Dumbledore... :)

I think you meant *impudent* brat; to impute means to ascribe an attribute to someone.

Thanks for the story. I enjoyed it.

No matter how bossy & self righteous Hermione is, she stuck by Harry when it would have been better for her to step away. She was there when no one else was. It's good to see her realize authority can lie too.

Pleased to see Dumbles is portrayed as evil. Few people picked up on that line of his "I knew I was sentencing you to 10 long dark years-" that showed exactly what kind of person he was. First class bastard! As for Ginny being a bitch, with a mother like that how can she be anything else? The only girl & baby of the family? A classic recipe for spoiled selfish brat.

I know that Sirius is dead... but what happened to Remus? He isn't mentioned at all. Not even in a letter or memory. Its like he doealsnt exist. I also wish you would have included more of the Twins.

Loved it

Capital letters, commas, then vs than, there their and they're, semi-colons... all of these are concepts you CLEARLY lack knowledge of. I strongly suggest finding an appropriately qualified beta-reader, and/or teacher to help you figure out the appropriate use of these (evidently) alien concepts, because right now, your grammar is thoroughly deplorable. Your story has potential but you OBVIOUSLY need help with your grammar. I suggest going back to the very start, replanning the entire thing from scratch, drafting it longhand and then asking someone you trust to correct it for you, apply said corrections, have it checked over again and then... type it up. Before you post it, have someone check it over once again for errors. it can be the same person or it doesn't have to be...

Loved it

This was great!
Thank you!