I was on board with this story at the beginning and although I know this story was written a while ago I don’t want to discourage you from writing further, but I am so viscerally uncomfortable with how the story seems to be romanticizing an unbelievably toxic this relationship. There’s angst and then there’s just refusing to recognize the severity of a situation within the text.

Ugh...you forced her to get pregnant at 18 years old? WTH, that's really $h!tty, just no.

No, you just ran out of ideas. OMG, why am I still reading this?
Got no life, that's why.

You know, I've noticed that authors with not so well written stories tend to threaten readers about not updating if they don't get a certain numbers of reviews. I wonder why that is so?

I kinda hate your story. Why the hell does Sakura have to worry about the stupid wedding preparations, when Sasuke is the one that needs fo fulfill his clan's orders?

Awww :3

How ironic XD He CAN burst it into flames with his eyes. Amaterasu, remember?

YOU SLY DUCK

I realize that this story was made in 2007 but I had just recently finished it and read some of your other stories and let me just say ... YOUR WORK IS THE BEST I LOVE YOUR STORIES AMD YOU INSPIRE ME TO WRITE FANFICTION YOU ARE SUCH AN INSPIRATION AND YOUR STORIES ARE LIKE A WORK OF ART SO DETAILED AND JUST OVERALL THE BEST YOU ARE MY IDOL !...
Ahem with that out of the way Good Luck !

Okay but im crying because you ended it on "works everytime" boi

I solo knew he would name his daughter Keiko. That's really nice of Sasuke. It's a pretty name.

Hey there! I finished reading this story yesterday, and I decided to leave a review since I enjoyed reading it. I LOVE SasuSaku even though it might never happen so I've read a lot of fanfics about them and this is definitely one of the nicer ones. Naruto's "speech" when he became Hokage made me laugh so much and that scene in which Sasuke thought that his son's hair color was pink was EPIC. I also liked it when Sasuke decided to name his daughter after Keiko because, after all, she did save his life. My answer to your question about Naruto and Naruto Shippuden is that I'm really not sure. They're both really nice. Naruto had more humor and Shippuden has more depth, if you know what I mean. And to answer your other question about who's better between Naruto and Sasuke, my personal favorite character is Sasuke. Although Naruto is pretty awesome too. And for the rest of your questions, in my opinion: turkey has more fat than chicken; cats are better pets than dogs; and Batman is wayyy cooler and smarter than Superman. Right. So, I'll read the sequel to this story as soon as I can.

Lol! Killed someone with a pingpong ball!

Wait wat! So sasuke knew he has nightmares and use it to his advantage?! Lolz

'valiance and quick thinking.'..
more like 'violence and quick temper' LOL
no, this is a positive coment, I laugh so hard that I fell from my chair clutching my stomach reading this chapter.
this officially my favourite chapter hohoho XD