It was awesome! can you perhaps write an epilogue?

What did he write?

W-O-W! this is a whole new level of suspense and tradgedy! i absolutely loved it! keep doing more stories like this please! please with sugar and oreos on top? xoxoxoxoxox!

hmm... care to write a backstory?

brittney

Aw man, I finally read Fight Club a while ago and I understand this so much more. Or maybe it just seems like I understand it more . . .

I went on a bit of a Chuck Palahniuk spree, he's fantastic. Though I've yet to see the movies for Fight Club/Choke.

Anyway, I just thought that I'd mention that I appreciate this a lot more now :D

Okay, thats really, really sad... crying now. Although, there seem to be an awful lot of Artemsi suicide fanfics. It's rather worrying... does everyone hate Arty or something?

Deeply touching. I'm speechless and almost crying. All of those facts in the middle of dying makes it seem like he's calm enough to think and desperate to escape at the same time. I really can't think of anything to say.

I'm listening to What Hurts the Most by Rascal Flatts when I read this and the combination of an angsty story and a sad song very nearly set me off.

WOW! Did he do suicide? He was writing to Holly, wasn't he?

Lovley little gem you've written here. The random number factoids are very Artemis. And I like his line "Knowledge had never saved his life" {even though it's not entirely true ;)} Fave.

Criticism? Are you kidding me. This was so pretty so.

"This is your life and it’s ending one minute at a time." I'm gushing.

"Everything was different when you were about to die." gorgeous.

"There are more painful things than bleeding. Just like there are things that are scarier than knowing you’re about to die. Not that any come to his mind at that moment." I truly love how you are potraying Artemis. He's always been cocky, but the underlying diffidence is showing in his last minutes.

The idea of a countdown was quite cool, but what I like most of this is the feeling I get from reading it. There's a confidence to your fics that I don't see that often. There's no beating around the bush - it's just marvelous right from the Title to The End.

Really nice. Are you going to post the note?

That was so sad.. how did you find out the more obscure number facts?

T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T *sniffs*

a little sick, and sad

which is why i love this

W/

F.S

Awesomeness, Milly. Angst is teh win. *thumbs up* *is not very coherent right now*

Just a qualm here: "There are also five senses that human beings possess." - I'd switch that around to "Human beings posess five senses." The passive voice can make things more wordy than they needs to be.

I'll probably nom this once I remember to.

-FH