Aha. I'm reviewing a day after I read it, but oh well. Anyway, I loved it. 'Specially this part:

'Donald, Goofy and I took after “Ansem” to The End of the World. We defeated him and had to lock both the King and Riku in Kingdom Hearts to complete our task.

Then, I don’t remember what happened.'

But I noticed a small technical error. It's 'Xehanort' not 'Xenohart'.

-cylliel

Heh, this was actually pretty good! I love it!