Yes thank you for writing this fanfiction. I always wanted them to expand upon the Dark Ocean, but because it was too dark they just threw the arc away.

SALAMON IS A CAT!

whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy( goes on till next chapter )

WHAT WILL HAPPEN I 3 KARI AND SHE IS MY FAVORITE SO U DONT PLZ

u did rlly good no bad words plz im 10 yrs old thx u!

The only thing you continuity missing is good Taiora.

this is great u should do more of this stuff

this is good

This reminds me of my first digimon story written back in high school. It was a script though. I don't have it anymore, but um, like in Adventure 02 I used MaloMyotismon and had the orginals there. It took place between season one and two. Thanks for the memories. It kinda seems to me, like me; you made Joe fall off the planet at the end (altho Gomamon is there).

Anyway, sorry for typing off text, but I loved it. Thanks.

Unless this fic takes place in 2003 it should not be called Adventure 03.

Adventure takes place in 19.

Adventure 02 takes place three years later, in 2002.

Therefore it is called 02.

So since your Adventure 03 takes place in 2004 it should not be called 03, same with 04.

(And I am not being hypocritical as my 03 does take place in 03.)

Otherwise, great fic!

HEYY

That was awsome rite an other one that envolves Kari the most(L)

Love Ya Lot's

Sincerelly

Takari Girl 101

I like this story, plz update son, i wrote my first digi fic and was hoping you could help me, It's cald: A Dark Descent I...plz check it out and tell me what you think!

the story is good and had a good plot behind it. i would like to what other digimon stories you came up with

It seemed almost rushed to me but that's just one writer's opinion. Do you have AIM? I would like to talk to someone more experienced in writing and help me with these ideas running through my brain.

sanctus

That was a good one *Applauds enthusiastically* (I need a spell check for my reviews...). I think what is most noticable about this is the balance between themes (darkness, romance, friendship, family, adventure, etc. etc.) and between characters. I always find it hard to make sure that people have equal speaking time. Good job! You are quite a writer.