What. The actual. HELL did I just read?

This is so confusing to read.

The idea of Bakura transferring to Domino High BEFORE Yuugi completes the Puzzle is strangely interesting to me.

Oh that was cool :) I like the confusing feeling it gives :D

Forgot to review...

I liked this a lot. Not only is it one of my favorite pairings (actually my favorite), it's written in a style I like. I love the non-linear style that this is in and I love how IC the characters are. This is excellent.

Well! So I promised I would read it, and so I did-promises made, promises kept.

It's interesting, and though I have no desire for the pairing, I really enjoy the style that you write in. Doing this in short cuts really makes the piece seem rushed, in a good way. The reader can't stop, has to quickly move on to keep pace with the format, and the broken dialogue keeps with that. Well done, as always! I didn't see anything grammatically off, though it was naturally hard to keep the characters in line with the lack of clarification-but again, all adding to the hurried, intense feeling of the piece. Nicely done. :D

Excellent story. Poor Yugi is lost.

Nice. A big thumbs up from me, that was absolutely excellent.

This is -excellent-.

I love the concept – because *yes*, it would so have worked – and the way it's executed; I was a bit confused the first time I read it, but that doesn't have to be a bad thing.

"The new kid’s eyes were sharp, and his face cruel, but he was smiling." – I think I liked that line because it sums up the way he's acting throughout the whole story.

Part of me is just gleeful while reading this, because I love dark Bakura, and don't like Yami much, and even if I did I would probably love stories in which Bakura *wins* – and at the same time it's so heartbreaking, especially how Yuugi is being his caring and brave self, and the way this is turned against him and his other is terrible.