J'aime beaucoup c'est mignon.

One of the greatest and saddest one-shots I have read XD

HAKU IS A BOY! *name says it all*

This makes Kakashi feel even shittier for killing her, even though it was an accident.

awwwwww im sad now...

stil that was pritty good

Very bittersweat

This was excellent it's taken me awhile to review cus well i'm lazy and forgetful but i didn't forget about this story just whether i reviewed or not. i personaly belive you should get an award for this i just wish you'd do a longer narufemhaku you have amazing talent UNLIKE ME but your awesome your stories awesome the end

Kaijukage

This story is in one word...'vague'.

It didn't make sense, at all. How is it true love when they met once? Why did Haku kiss him?

I can totally mean why you'd say your came with this on a whim. It isn't detailed enough.

Good luck with your next story,

Iron Monkey Fist.

Nice job and a good NarufemHaku story.

why does haku gotta die? haku is one of the most under valued characters of naruto. but i would have loved to see this happen. its just so dramatic.

AH! Some good things AWLAWYS hit an author in the shower! Its the same here, i too think about plots and such in the shower.

Great fic.

continue the story and let Haku's death be his motivation to be powerful!

Not bad. It was acute little oneshot.

I loved it.. But now you need to write a NaruHaku story where she survives... just so my heart won't die right before christmas because of you... you don't want that do you?

Although short, I'm very pleased with the quality of this fic overall. The grammar is good, the plot is good, and as a NaruHaku fan... well, I just really like this story!

Nice job! I really love this pairing. And you didn't overuse "..." those are good in a story to show pauses in speech, thoughts, and actions. You used them in the right place and it came together really well.