Amazing, the potential this story is showing is astounding.

Lyther

Very nice AU story. Are you no longer writing? just asking since it has been so long since you have updated.

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

update please

Don't stoP on the story I want to know what happens next, cmon don't give up on the story.

TT Plz hurry with the next chapter! it's been like 2 years! did you stop writeing this? oh! i really like this.

come on already and finish

I really loved it! I have to say, the whole "Kei-is-Mute" Thing is pretty godamn well settled into this story, i dont think you could change it, Mute Keitaro is much better than the one in the manga. xD

Anyways, Bloody good job your doing on this, Plus with it being focused around Mokoto, The potential is magnificantly huge!

I hope you'll play on all the ideas your mind can come up with Keitaro's inability to speak.

Right, i swore to myself i would never do long-winded reveiws so i wont. Great Story, I shall be putting this on Story alert.

Keep it up! :)

Get back here and finish this!

I like the story, you're a good writer...uh please tell me that you'll continue this story its very good and its grabbed my attention and that of many others as you can see...

Please tell me that this isn't discontinued.

Ausome start, really! I look forward to see this puppy continued and updated soon. You seem to have very good outlook on vocabulary and, well jeez, I wouldn't be suprised if in later years I see a novel done by you. Your writing style is one of the best I've seem so far. Please continue!

Very interesting story. I like the paring. I hope you continue this soon. Well, good luck

Interesting story you have cooked up one or mistakes but anyway a interesting and great read. Looking forward to next chapter.

its a great story so far

cant wait to read more