Reviews for The words I never said
Jayjayha chapter 1 . 12/12/2019
I think they both regret not having sex that night. He scared her off but only because she was falling and she never felt that way before. She let him in and was falling for him so it wouldn't have been just sex at that time either. If they had the triangle from hell might have been avoided. Possibly.
YourxMuse chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Great way to leave us hanging! :) It was really good though, just make sure you stick with one point of view instead of switching in the middle of the story :) But it was so sweet. I loved the piggy back ride and Luke's 'problem' Great job.
godsandmonsters chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I really liked this, it was super cute! I loved how embarrassed Luke got when he had his little, er, problem, haha. And what Peyton said was great, and the piggy back ride thing was awesome!

The only thing I didn't really like was the use of the word "ass" in intimate moments. And how you sometimes switched from talking ABOUT the characters in third person, to talking AS the characters in first. But thats just constructive criticism :)

Your a GREAT writer and I loved this overall :)
LPismeanttobe chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
Fluff it might be,but it's LP,so it's awesome!Short and very sweet,I like it a lot [
WDE11 chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Love your stories. Can't believe you left off there, though.

Hope you don't forget "Stranded" when you get a break from school.

Thanks for the teaser.
pojoto chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
I know, you're probably saying, "What the hell, Ashley, this is so late", but I kinda got sidetracked. Hey, at least I'm finally reveiwing, right? lol. Well, I thought this was very sweet and encompassed LP to perfection. I can definitely see that you're growing as a writer and connecting with the characters more and more. Bravo, my girl, bravo. ;-] And the small amount of smut was just right, can't wait for an update of LPR and Stranded though, you better have a holiday soon. :)
jamyj30 chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
nicely written, love leyton
Paige chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
It ended too soon! lol This was great. Peyton's confession was nice. Leyton fics are a minority on this site and an even bigger minority when it comes to smutt, so I hope you continue writing more!