“...to hide the most obvious physical betrayal of his attraction to her.”

Knuckles, you don’t have one of those.

“‘What’cha workin’ on?’ Silver asked...”

Silver, I think you mean “What’cha doin’?” (Sorry. I was watching Phineas and Ferb yesterday.)

“...Amy rose from the table...”

I spy an accidental pun. Also, the girls in the Women’s department are going to embarrass Knuckles... Knowing his short temper, this won’t end well for them.

This is a really great story! I have to thank TV Tropes for introducing me to it. However, I noticed something really off about the dialogue. Snively said they have to open Egman’s at 6:00, but it’s already been established a few times that the store is open 24/7, and it’s quite obvious that the robots are still there... Yeah, there’s no way Shadow won’t find that suspicious when he learns that information.

Ugh, why, oh why can't this be updated! I love it so much!

I know it's actually on Devianart, but I can't see it cause the mature filter is on! Help!

No, LordiusBiscuit I can't read the story on deviantART because Invader-Sam PUT THE STORY ON MATURE ARGE! I really want read want happens next...:'(

So RealmofRejectedMindsStudios, PLZ upload soon. Like NOW!

This story is highly entertaining however coma there are a few things in the story that are coping Knothole High by The Crobatman. Such as Sonic playing with Sally's tail when they where being introduced at Max's party which ALSO occurred in Knothole high. It's either Knothole High is coping The Grind or The Grind coping Knothole High OR you are the same person who wrote Knothole High and put the same stuff that happened there in the story. Don't get me wrong I actually enjoyed reading this but I just wanted to put that out.

Anyway plz continue. I wanna c wut happens to my Maxie baby :-P

this isn't the real author of this amazing story, here is her deviantart page where the story was originally posted.
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Hope fully the ones who seemed to enjoy this story find this link so you can read the rest of about 47 chapters and counting... it is one hell of a story...

Will you update soon?

I like it :)

I am a BIG fan Knuckles and Rouge relationships! So you like made my day and i just love the beginning of this story and the Walmart Lingerie thing was like the best.

You have to update this!

Excellent story! But I always find it sad when you stumble upon a great story with an excellent plot that your very interested in and it's not been updated in awhile :(

Hey. Just thought I'd review to say how much I've enjoyed your fic so far. You tend to see an awful lot of 'high school drama' Sonic fics, but very few are this well-written or anything like as interesting.

You've managed to keep all the characters actually in-character, and allowed them to keep the powers and abilities that makes them so unique, thus staying true enough to the canon Sonic-universe to make it a real Sonic story, and not just a high school sitcom with Sonic characters.

Your dialogue is also very nicely done, it's easy to hear the characters speaking the lines. Excellent work. I'm adding a story alert in case you decide to update.

Wow. Just wow. Your story is one of the best I've seen in a while and I can't say that often. I am totally, utterly in love with all the detail found in here, your alternate universe is a treasure chest full of little delights, be it Muttski, Decoe and Bocoe or Lien-Da...

I have generally high standards for fanfictions (I guess we all develop them after a while...) and your style, obvious proof-reading for typos and the like, ideas, and careful, well-timed plot development are a joy to read, I can't word it otherwise. It's a crying shame there's only 25 reviews for this here - you should definitely put up a link or something tho, that people can read the rest of this on DevART - if my friend hadn't told me about this I'd be heartbroken!

I generally don't like Highschool!Sonicfics, but yours is the exception to the rule. I really can't wait how the plot of Robotnik and the Dark Legion (? XD) etc unfolds and what Shadow will ultimately be capable of. The family scenes are unbelievably fluffy and I enjoy the sonsal, knuxouge and silvamy a lot. Thanks a LOT for writing this! I do hope you read the reviews that go to your ff acount even anymore...XD

I'm really enjoying this story, hopefully it'll continue eventually. I love the way Sally's written, and putting in Mogul and Lien-Da were nice touches as well. One question: with all these evil business-types around, when is somebody going to snap and hire Nack to do some "persuading" with his lovely gun collection?

Lookin' forward to the (maybe) update!

-NullChronicler-