Reviews for Tracking Trouble
Reader chapter 2 . 9/9/2012
I must say that I loved this alot and want to see more! _ It wasnt in a usual catagory so im surprised but very happy that I found something new and fun to read. Thank You! Im writing this here but i read the other 2 as well and loved them, just didnt wanna write the same part over and over again. It was so cute to picture alittle bee in a cave with optimus trying to figure out how to get him out lol, the others being there was plus too. And the obstacle course was hilarious! cheeky little runts :3 The only prob was the continuity as Id think movie bee would have fluttered his doorwings a million times and g1 characters dont have some things mentioned, so I guess it was a fun mix XD which is real nice too, though funny cuz the two are very physically different with doorwings and sizes and colors of all bots and combining them was hilarious, i thought of a small bee that boxes with no doorwings XD cute but i love those wings! anyways Great Job! please continue!
Witch08 chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
you have to do another installment to the series, please? i want to see what happens next in bee's adventures. hope to see the next one soon!
TOONSRULE chapter 2 . 2/19/2008
This was really cute, I have also read some of your other stories and I like them a lot as well. If you could write more about Bumblebee that would be awsome!
silvertales chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
I've truly enjoyed this run of fics watching Bumblebee as a young cadet trying to prove himself. I'd love to see more in this vein; following young Bumblebee's Academy adventures and seeing the reations of the Autobots he admires so much.

Your young Bumblebee is just so wonderfully realized and complete and so very spot-on. Bravo!
SkyHighFan chapter 2 . 10/27/2007
Yeah: how'd Bumblebee and Jazz get away?
mystdogs chapter 2 . 10/18/2007
I love this series, I can't wait for the next one:)
Paleodex chapter 2 . 10/18/2007
Yeah! Bumblebee's okay :-)

Love what your writting, keep on going!
Bluebird Soaring chapter 2 . 10/18/2007
I bet you could get another chapter or 2 on this one...of course I really am enjoying this whole series about Bee and the academy...more please )
Truth of Barricade chapter 2 . 10/18/2007
I love this story. Nice job Bee!

So Bee met the team did he. I think that Bee is going to go very far. I really hope you get another story out. This is getting very good.
kitsunefire chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Nicely written! I'll be looking for more updates.
PrancingTiger86 chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Kool! Can't wait for the next part!
Truth of Barricade chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
I love your cadet stories. I really hope you update this soon because I am about to jump out of my chair. Very good and I love how you portray Bee. I think you keep everyone VERY well in-character.

Great job.
Paleodex chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Love it! I sincerely hope you continue to update, otherwise I might have to confiscate your cookies! jks, lol! Anywas, keep up the good work.