Reviews for Seven Years Seven Lies |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aww |
![]() ![]() ![]() i reall like this beginning, please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG that was so awsome! So much compacted into something so short! The emotion! I love it! Update! WO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i luv this story whats going to happen next update as fast as u can |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely a good idea, but your grammar could use some improvement. I'd like to see how this all plays out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story, but there are some things you need to improve, and I found it very hard to read. When a person talks, it has to go on a new line. Also, see these three dots here... that's an ellipsis, and it is a pause in the middle of a sentance. There are heaps of incorrect uses of that ellipsis here and there. Otherwise, it's a good story so far. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a very good beginin keep goin |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon, this could be a good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good story, a bit fast but still pretty good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() COL UPDATE SOON LIKE ASAP ! ~funkismything |